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Does the following line of dialogue read well, do you think? And do I need the comma after vampire?
“I suppose some might find being on a first-name basis with a vampire, bizarre.”
Or might it be better to say --
"I suppose some might find it bizarre, being on a first-name basis with a vampire."
“I suppose some might find being on a first-name basis with a vampire, bizarre.”
Or might it be better to say --
"I suppose some might find it bizarre, being on a first-name basis with a vampire."