I have been writing for about 5 years as time permits, and am not sure exactly what age range this story falls in. Its 29.345 words all in a rhyme.
I have found that it appeals to almost any age group (the child in all of us). I am just starting to do something with it. I have put it away for months then read it again and I like ti more every time i read it. But I wrote it with children in mind , as if I were reading and telling a story to young children say 8 to 12 years old. Now I this found this wonderful web site AW and am looking for advice on step 2 editing and critiquing.
At the moment i have all of the text centered in the page in short one line phrases as you would write a normal poem. I find it is easier to read out loud. In paragraphs some times the rhyme can get lost. So I am now looking for advice and help from experienced writers and anyone willing to help. I enjoy when some one reads it and is honest about what they think, I do not get discouraged i find it drives me more to perfect my stories. I have no education in writing and am very rusty with grammar and so forth , but I love to tell and write fiction stories to children that will open there minds to the possibility of a fantasy world existing.