tips for race creation?

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satyesu

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races and their basic, universal culture, if you've tips on that. i have one fantasy race i was inspired to create and i love it and can't think of anything that compares now. any tips on creating really unique, intriguing fantasy/alien races? thanks
 

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I think that races/cultures/species turn out the best when you start with a thematic point or question you want to explore in the lives of individuals. For example There are races with 1 gender, 3 genders, individuals that change genders, races where one gender is dominant to or quite different from another, or there is a shortage of one gender or another. There are races which incorporate some element of animalistic biology like heat cycles, scent marking, ability to fly. There are cultures organized around nuclear families, around a dominant male with a harem and a bachelor herd, around a small pride/pack or a larger clan. If you want to study a particular life event like officially becoming an adult, making one's first kill, losing one's virginity, menopause, etc. then you can create a culture where that event has an important ritual associated with it. If you want to study some philosophical or magical theory you can make it important to a culture's religion or educational program, or reflected in their fashion and slang.
 

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The links below are pretty great advice for avoiding cliches.

http://limyaael.livejournal.com/151278.html
http://limyaael.livejournal.com/151562.html

Personally, I agree with most of it.

I know it is often seen as silly because of the RPG reference, but balancing races or at least taking into account the different power levels in important. The short of this is that one race (or species) shouldn't be inherently superior to others in every way unless you are prepared to follow that to it's logical conclusion.
 
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This is kind of silly and might not be helpful, so I'd use it in addition to what's already been suggested--but race and culture creation has come most easily to me when I just write the race or culture in question, in action, and learn from it that way.

Whenever I start out trying to build a race by writing up a profile or something, and then try writing them in action, I find that I have to keep revising the profile because when the characters are in action in the story, I learn a lot more from them that way and I find out that my profile is often quite wrong. I learn about my races and cultures from experience, is what I'm saying. Like the difference between writing a paper about a people's culture, versus actually living among them for a time.

Perhaps try writing some shorter stories or scenes featuring your race in action--simple plots that focus on certain aspects of their culture you wish to explore, like a religious ceremony, a social gathering, a wedding, etc.--and that might help.
 

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I think that races/cultures/species turn out the best when you start with a thematic point or question you want to explore in the lives of individuals. .

But if you do that, be careful or your species will end up as a one-trick pony. A non-SF example would be all those kids books where a young reader could easily get the impression that Jews exist for no other reason than to die (or survive) in the Holocaust - thousands of years of culture reduced to one recent event. By all means consider the question you want to answer and build biology or customs around it - but remember that a race that refuses to acknowledge the existence of gender *also* has customs for everything from how you earn a living to how kings are elected to how you guard your treasures, and not all of those are related to your thematic point. Terry Pratchett's dwarves are a case where this is done very well. Sample folk-song lyric: "Gold, gold, gold, gold, gold...."
 

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In a Polynesian creation myth, God created a man, a woman, a dog, a pig and a chicken and put them in a boat in the great primevil ocean. In a similar manner, a dwarf creation myth may involve God creating a Dwarf and his mate and placing them in the primevil mithril mine.

In the "Weight of Glory" C. S. Lewis writes why he believes man first started telling stories about elves:

"We want something else which can hardly be put into words—to be united with the beauty we see, to pass into it, to receive it into ourselves, to bathe in it, to become part of it. That is why we have peopled air and earth and water with gods and goddesses and nymphs and elves—that, though we cannot, yet these projections can, enjoy in themselves that beauty grace, and power of which Nature is the image. That is why the poets tell us such lovely falsehoods."

I have sometimes thought about what it would be like to fly, or swim like a dolphin, or be part of a race that is the most comfortable swimming in the lava of an active volcano. I ask myself how I would look at the world differently.
 
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