Naming an 'Ancient' people

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tailstrike

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Hey all im looking to give a name to the original inhabitants of my land...I was thing something along the lines of "The Old Ones" or maybe "The Creators" but im not sure the latter will work as i havent quite fleshed out the entire thing yet...

Any ideas??

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The Fathers.
The Mothers.
The Ancients.
The People.
Jeff.
The Originals.
Native Xs. (whatever the name of the land is)
The Ancestors.
The First Inhabitants.
Protohabitans.
Red Sox.
They From Whom We Descend.
Primans.
Proprians.
Jeff (not the same Jeff as before).
People of the Morning.
People of the Earth.
Homo Pria.
Genera.

Dale
 

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The Natives

The First Ones

The People of the Sky/Mountains/Soil

The Ancient Ones

The Tribe
 

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Archeans
Elderfolk
Those Who Came Before
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Founders
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Aboriginals -- this word literally means original inhabitants / native / indigenous / those who have inhabited a region from the beginning.
 

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What your people call the original inhabitants will ideally tell the reader a lot about:
1) your people
2) Their interactions with the original inhabitants
3) What happened.

So calling the original inhabitants "Natives" or "Mud-grubbers" is totally different from calling them "Demons" and is different again from calling them "The Elders".

Given that, it's hard to really know what to advise you with no clue at all about the history :)
If I read "The Creators" I might assume you had a really old and powerful race that made cool stuff and disappeared mysteriously, with possible but unclear links to the current people there. Cause I've seen that before :D If it's different from that, the nuance of how it's different would inform the best term to use.

I'd suggest not "The Old Ones" in a fantasy series, esp a YA one, since that's pretty strongly associated with Susan Cooper's "Dark is Rising" books in a lot of heads, and shall probably be more after the (cringe-at-how-bad-it-sounds) movie.
 
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The First Men
The Golden Men
The Mud People
The X-ites (X meaning the original inhabitants of the land e.g Tokonites)
Cavemen
Tribesmen
Primitives
The Godly People
The Images of the Gods
The Elders

Any of those?
 

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That's it! I'm naming my ancient tribe "Jeff." :D

The Fathers.
The Mothers.
The Ancients.
The People.
Jeff.
The Originals.
Native Xs. (whatever the name of the land is)
The Ancestors.
The First Inhabitants.
Protohabitans.
Red Sox.
They From Whom We Descend.
Primans.
Proprians.
Jeff (not the same Jeff as before).
People of the Morning.
People of the Earth.
Homo Pria.
Genera.

Dale
 

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Is this something they called themselves or something they are called by the idiots who can no longer repair the machines they left behind? I don't really see a race of creatures calling themselves The Old Ones. And BTW, that was used on an old episode of StarTrek(original) and in probably dozens of other stories.
 

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Is this something they called themselves or something they are called by the idiots who can no longer repair the machines they left behind?

Or the idiots call them 'that bunch of people who left all this complicated stuff lying around' or 'The litterbugs', or 'The people what blew themselves up'. In a suitably ancient language of course :D

Or what I'm really trying to say: Without knowing your world, difficult to come up with a suitable name.
 

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I suppose that i should actually flesh out the whole thing and see how things are going to work and then think of names but there are a few here that i actually really like thanks to all so far

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Aboriginals -- this word literally means original inhabitants / native / indigenous / those who have inhabited a region from the beginning.

Im sorry to be specific but i think u mean 'aborigines'...

An 'aboriginal' is the singular and 'aborigines' the plural...
 

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Im sorry to be specific but i think u mean 'aborigines'...

An 'aboriginal' is the singular and 'aborigines' the plural...

Nope.
They are two different words with almost-identical meanings but somewhat different usage and connotations.

Aboriginal(s) is a strictly more general term, as far as I know. You can call the indigenous people of the Americas, or indigenous tribes in India, Aboriginals; but they are not Aborigines.
 

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Yep, Shweta's right. The name should reflect what the new folks think of the old folks.

Personally, I'd go with The ones I gotta visit in Scottsdale and how come I never call them anymore, and no, I don't know when I'm gonna give them grandkids.

What, there isn't a word for that in their language?
 

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sorry about that coming from Australia the original inhabitants here are called 'Aborigines' as a people/whole and the individual person themselves is called 'an Aboriginal'...that is why i said what i said
 

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sorry about that coming from Australia the original inhabitants here are called 'Aborigines' as a people/whole and the individual person themselves is called 'an Aboriginal'...that is why i said what i said
Makes sense :)
But that's a specific usage.
 

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I would suggest another approach if you have no idea what they were like.

Pick a fun-sounding name that has nothing to do with the age of these people. E.g. 'The Boingers', 'The Wailers', 'The Interstitials', 'The Wellmen', 'The Morris-dancing Jeffs'.

Now work out why they got called that.
 

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IMHO, naming is the hardest part of writing.
 

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i have the names of some of my characters worked out and it took me a couple of hours to find the right name for what i was looking for and what would work...but it seems silly to be stuck on something that is sometimes so simple...
 

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i have the names of some of my characters worked out and it took me a couple of hours to find the right name for what i was looking for and what would work...but it seems silly to be stuck on something that is sometimes so simple...
Simple but not easy.
Naming may be the most powerful incluing device we've got.
 
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