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Greetings
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I'm currently working on a scene (yes folks, he does occasionally take a break from wondering what to write about to actually write something
;-)!) where a man is compelled to jump from the dive platform of a yacht into the water wearing weights but no life-support equipment. To better frame his lovely female companion for his death, I thought to have him jump awkwardly, feet first, and strike the back of his head against some object that is lying on the platform.
It needs to be a tool or other object that one would expect to find there, but which could also be dragged/ knocked over the side with him. It should be plausable as something a relatively weak person could heft and bust his head with. My thought is that some enterprising ME who is an avid CSI fan might match the wound profile to it's source object and thus dismiss all this nonsense the woman is spewing out about strange lights, mysterious songs and rich guys drowning themselves for no reason.
Any ideas on a suitable object?
Thanks
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I'm currently working on a scene (yes folks, he does occasionally take a break from wondering what to write about to actually write something
;-)!) where a man is compelled to jump from the dive platform of a yacht into the water wearing weights but no life-support equipment. To better frame his lovely female companion for his death, I thought to have him jump awkwardly, feet first, and strike the back of his head against some object that is lying on the platform.
It needs to be a tool or other object that one would expect to find there, but which could also be dragged/ knocked over the side with him. It should be plausable as something a relatively weak person could heft and bust his head with. My thought is that some enterprising ME who is an avid CSI fan might match the wound profile to it's source object and thus dismiss all this nonsense the woman is spewing out about strange lights, mysterious songs and rich guys drowning themselves for no reason.
Any ideas on a suitable object?
Thanks