Switching POV in a new chapter?

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eric11210

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Hi all.

I'm in the middle of rewriting my novel. One of the comments I'd had way back when was that it needed to be done in one person's POV, i.e. third limited or first person.

I've done that until now, and I'm closing in on the end, but I have two scenes that are important to the story and are told from the POV of aliens. If I simply put those scenes into chapters of their own, are those okay, or should I find a way to do without them? Both scenes are pretty important. The first shows why the ship is being invaded and the second one shows how my MC thwarts the alien's plans. I probably could rework them from the POV of the MC, but it would be much less dramatic.

Any thoughts appreciated.

Thanks in advance.

Eric
 

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I have seen it done effectively in nearly all novels by Jilly Cooper, and indeed in my second novel the POV changes right at the end. However, in all cases it has remained third-person, not first to third or vice versa. I think as a reader I might be thrown by a first to third shift... hope this helps.
 

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Thanks. I'd intended to stick to third the entire way. I agree first to third would ve way too jolting, but my concern was 10 chapters told from the POV of my MC and then, nearly midway through the book, a chapter from a different POV.

Thanks for your input.

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I've never heard of any rule saying a story has to be told entirely from one characters POV. In fact, I would find that rather boring. If, however, you only have one or two chapters that switch POV, that might be a bit weird for the reader as the new POV might not give the reader enough of a chance to figure out who that character is. But like all things, if you can write it well then there's no problem.

Personally, I tend to use multiple POVs for everything I write in third limited.
 

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Multiple 3rd person POV's are fine if it's consistent throughout the book. But to have a whole book in one person's POV and suddenly, at the end, switch to someone else's POV just for two scenes is very, very jarring and is likely to result in the reader going WTF?

If you can write them from your MC's POV it would be better, or introduce the other POV earlier in the book so the reader realizes you're going to switch once in a while.
 

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I agree with Nevada that as long as it consistent, you should be okay. I prefer third person, but apparently, a lot of people like first person. Either way should work.

However, I've noticed a trend with books now where the POV's are mixed. The main character may be first person, then all the seconday characters are third person. I'm reading a book by Stephen White right now, and he starts with third person, then switches to first person for the MC, then first person for a secondary MC, back to third person some more, then back to first again with the MC. I'm struggling to get through it.

Some people may love it that way.

I guess what I'm really getting at is that there is no fixed standard or rule for POV style, unless you are a first-time writer. All of a sudden, all these arbitrary rules apply to the extreme. My suggestion is to keep it simple right now so you have a better chance of getting an agent. Once you're established, then you can experiment around.

I must say that many of these, as I call them, "arbitrary" rules make a lot of sense, and I think the industry would be much better if they made their established authors stick to them, and not just us unwashed masses in the trenches.
 

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I am writing a story where the POV changes from first person MC to third person Secondary MC but only at chapter breaks where it makes sense to tell the story that way.

But for first timers, consistency is key!
 

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My first published story alternated between third person internal (past tense) for the main character and first person present tense for the alien. There was a very different feel to the two sections as a result. I would be concerned if I suddenly got an alien point of view very late in a novel. One thing you might want to consider in making your decision about point of view is the question of stakes. Which person has more at stake in the final conflict? I'm guessing it's the humans, and that would incline me to argue for keeping their point of view. While the alien view is interesting, I think you can probably hint at it in other ways, rather than diverting from the central flow of your novel.
 

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Thanks for all your input folks. I'm thinking I should probably keep the same POV. For the part where the aliens come on board, I'll just keep my MC where he can hear the human's reactions and the other part, where the plans of the alien are foiled, I'll have him picturing it instead of actually being there.

I realized it would be tricky to do it otherwise besides the problem of the switch coming fairly late in the novel (chapter 11 is around 40% of the way through) the story is supposed to be narrated by a computer from the future that has researched the history of Kevin Sanders and is telling us what happened based on journal entries and its' own research. It would be a bit difficult for it to tell us thoughts from aliens directly since they are obviously not likely to have left journals for it to have followed their thoughts.

Thanks for all the input folks. I do appreciate it.

Eric
 
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