How to select a novel to compare yours to in the query

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First, thanks for all the great comments in the other thread-Future for historicals.

I've heard agents like the submitting author to list a recent, published book, and preferably a debut, as a comparison in the query letter. My problem is that while I read a lot of books-I can't read all of them (sigh). Plus, I read outside of historicals. I'm sure there are a lot of excellent books that don't become best sellers, and are smashed in the lower level bookshelves at B&N (a seriously bad place for an author to end up IMHO, but better than not being published). I'm just not sure of the boundaries...reminds me of dark water.

What procedure would you follow to locate such a comparison for your novel, if you needed too? The quickest way you would use to find similiar books.

Agents often remark that in queries the author should stay away from certain big name authors as it would be rare for an unpublished author to measure up. (This is sometimes noted as a turn off)

Bottom line, I wonder how important is this type comparison in the query?
Did you use it? Thanks
 

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No. I didn't use it (in any successful queries, anyway) and I don't think most agents would be impressed by a comparison to a successful novel. Tell them why *this* novel is the one they want to sell, not that you've copied someone else successfully.
 

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Bay - I suggest you ask the same question in query letter SYW aka Query Letter Hell. If you want, you can ask one of the mods to move this thread there. Or, you can post your query that way and see what the comments are.

Some of the worst queries I've seen (when I've looked at the queries there) have been ones that compare to a known publication or worse say take X and add Z and what do you get - my novel. Puma
 

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Puma,

I posted here to guage the feelings of historical writers first, because I'm tweaking my Q that just has never felt quite right to me. Since I'm debating using a comparison, I hoped some here could point me in the right direction from their experience. I've checked out the Q's in SYW and commented on a few. I wanted to be an active thread participant before throwing my own work in for critique, which I plan to do in a few days.

Please move the thread if it doesn't belong here. Thanks.
 

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I'm not a mod so I can't move the thread.

FWIW - I've never used a comparison. Puma
 

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I'd be more likely to compare myself to an author than to a particular book.
 

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I only make comparisons when their guidelines specifically ask me to. I never give more info than a particular agent asks for. How do I make the comparison? I don't. By the time it goes out on query, a few people have already read my manuscript. The last one I sent out...I had 6 people compare it to the same style as a particular book. When I queried an agent who asked me to make a comparison, I used the book that my readers compared my book to.
 

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I'd advise against comparing unless they specifically ask you to.

It just gives them grounds to laugh out loud, disagree, or set impossibly high standards. Or they might not like the book to which you compare your work, even though they might love yours. What new author needs those special-bonus-offer obstacles?

Sell them your book. Otherwise they'll be reading your MS while focusing not on your story, but Memoirs of a Geisha.
 
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If they do not ask, do not tell.

Exactly my motto. This is why we need to tailor our query letter to each agent. There are agents out there who request that the reader make comparisons...so, for them, I give them. But I take that out if I'm querying somebody else and they don't specifically ask for it.
 

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I've only done this once in a query letter. I was querying an agent who had represented a book that was very similar to mine in a lot of ways (epistolary, wartime setting, women 'making do' on the home front). The comparison intrigued that particular agent enough for a partial request, but I don't think any other agent would've been interested in the same comparison. Every other query has been comparison-free.

I'll echo everyone else above: tailor the letter to the particular agent.
 

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Wow. Thanks everyone.