Newbie- can someone help me edit this?

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emsleh-bob

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hey um well im new and it took me 5 miniutes to work this thing out!!
how pathetic! anyway um i was wondering if anyone could pretty please help me edit this story im writing at the moment?
i can send ya a copy or message u some of it?
i really need ideas and comments about it.
only young tho so dont expect muchh
ahh.. i'll add a little of my intro on..

Well to start off I think I should tell you who I am.
I am no one.
Don’t get me wrong, I’ve seen more than most people ever will and I am always there.
But that doesn’t make me someone.
Within those last three lines of reading I’m guessing you have already made assumptions about me. Anti-sociable. Difficult. Invisible. Whatever you like.
Truth is I’m only ever one of these things.
Invisible.
 
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