Fantasy Without Archery

Status
Not open for further replies.

dclary

Unabashed Mercenary
Poetry Book Collaborator
Requiescat In Pace
Registered
Joined
Oct 17, 2005
Messages
13,050
Reaction score
3,525
Age
57
Website
www.trumpstump2016.com
I have no elves in my fantasy. I realized I also don't have any archers. I'm not entirely sure why this is. For the big climatic battle at the end, there'll be archers, but for the main line of the story, the hero's a swordsman and, well, he just uses his sword.

I needed a good evil fantasy race for my WIP, and I think I've got a good one. At least, I've never seen anything like it.

For good fantasy races, the heroes are men and women, there's an ogre, who in my world is a cross between a traditional Tolkienian ogre and a Donaldson Sand Gorgon (the big club hands I liked). Ogres are a neutral race in this world, like a mountain lion. They attack when threatened, maddened, or hungry. They enjoy horses and cattle, and tend to upset ranchers as a result.

No dwarfs. No elves -- but there's a race of men who live in the woods, who are, I guess, a cross between robin hood's merry men and the elves of mirkwood. They're still mostly human, but have a way with wood, natures, etc.

Anyhoo, anyone else get through their Fantasy WIP (especially if you're writing high fantasy) and realize you've not included all the staples of the genre? (Isn't a hot-shot sharpshooting archer required today?)
 

mscelina

Teh doommobile, drivin' rite by you
Requiescat In Pace
Registered
Joined
Jan 18, 2007
Messages
20,006
Reaction score
5,353
Location
Going shopping with Soccer Mom and Bubastes for fu
I don't see why it would be, dclary. My Asphodel series has lots of archers--because there are lots of Elves. Darkshifters doesn't have a single (sling or) arrow making an appearance throughout the story; it's not appropriate for the type of combat I use in the story. I'd just focus on what you need to tell the story and not spend time/effort worrying about whether you need to include a specific archetype.

That's the great thing about our genre, I think. We don't have to include anything.
 

Mr. Chuckletrousers

Sith happens.
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Oct 30, 2008
Messages
665
Reaction score
160
Location
Virginia
Anyhoo, anyone else get through their Fantasy WIP (especially if you're writing high fantasy) and realize you've not included all the staples of the genre? (Isn't a hot-shot sharpshooting archer required today?)
I purposely am excluding as many staples as I can.
 

HeronW

Down Under Fan
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Dec 17, 2007
Messages
6,398
Reaction score
1,854
Location
Rishon Lezion, Israel
Archery likely evolved from the spear chucker which encreased the power and distance of a thrown spear 5x or more.

You may have a cultural/ethical ban on thrown weapons since it could be seen as cowardice/dishonorable not to face the enemy hand to hand.
 
Joined
Aug 7, 2005
Messages
47,985
Reaction score
13,247
I'm offended, Deek. Deeply so. You know me and my love of longbows.

I cry nao.

:cry:
 

Sarpedon

Banned
Joined
Jan 20, 2008
Messages
2,702
Reaction score
436
Location
Minnesota, USA
Yeah, I'd be skeptical of a no-archery world. The bow is a stone age weapon, maybe even older, bone age. The sword is a much newer thing (unless its a macuahuitl).

I don't really think that 'cultural bans' on weapons would work, either. At least not universally. The Church in Europe technically banned the crossbow. That didn't work. Also, in early england bows were banned, because anyone with a bow was suspected of being a poacher. This didnt' stop them from existing and even growing in popularity, until the government officially embraced them as the national weapon. It may be that certain social classes couldn't use a certain weapon, or not for a particular kind of combat; (like judicial combat) that has precedent.
 

Mr. Chuckletrousers

Sith happens.
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Oct 30, 2008
Messages
665
Reaction score
160
Location
Virginia
Yeah, I'd be skeptical of a no-archery world. The bow is a stone age weapon, maybe even older, bone age. The sword is a much newer thing (unless its a macuahuitl).

I don't really think that 'cultural bans' on weapons would work, either. At least not universally. The Church in Europe technically banned the crossbow. That didn't work. Also, in early england bows were banned, because anyone with a bow was suspected of being a poacher. This didnt' stop them from existing and even growing in popularity, until the government officially embraced them as the national weapon. It may be that certain social classes couldn't use a certain weapon, or not for a particular kind of combat; (like judicial combat) that has precedent.
I don't think he said it was a no archery world -- only that he wasn't using the 'Archer' archetype in any of his characters.
 

dclary

Unabashed Mercenary
Poetry Book Collaborator
Requiescat In Pace
Registered
Joined
Oct 17, 2005
Messages
13,050
Reaction score
3,525
Age
57
Website
www.trumpstump2016.com
Yeah, I'd be skeptical of a no-archery world. The bow is a stone age weapon, maybe even older, bone age. The sword is a much newer thing (unless its a macuahuitl).

I don't really think that 'cultural bans' on weapons would work, either. At least not universally. The Church in Europe technically banned the crossbow. That didn't work. Also, in early england bows were banned, because anyone with a bow was suspected of being a poacher. This didnt' stop them from existing and even growing in popularity, until the government officially embraced them as the national weapon. It may be that certain social classes couldn't use a certain weapon, or not for a particular kind of combat; (like judicial combat) that has precedent.

Well, the army has archers, and the woodland men uses bows to hunt and fight. This all comes to play when the world goes to war in the end, but our heroes for 90% of the book simply don't use -- or even have -- one.
 

AceTachyon

Odd person
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Apr 22, 2005
Messages
6,456
Reaction score
975
Location
The Lair, WA
Website
www.abnersenires.com
Well, the army has archers, and the woodland men uses bows to hunt and fight. This all comes to play when the world goes to war in the end, but our heroes for 90% of the book simply don't use -- or even have -- one.
I don't see anything wrong with that.

It's not like a D&D group that seems to require at least one PC for non-magic ranged attack purposes.

(At least, every group that I ever played in or DM-ed had one PC with a bow and ranged attack skills. Except CP2020 and Shadowrun; we all had guns.)
 

Sarpedon

Banned
Joined
Jan 20, 2008
Messages
2,702
Reaction score
436
Location
Minnesota, USA
Oh thats fine. Sorry I misunderstood. You could have your MCs all come from a city. That would be a nice change. Archery is kind of a rural thing. Like Machiavelli said, recruit your infantry from the country and your cavalry from the towns.
 

dclary

Unabashed Mercenary
Poetry Book Collaborator
Requiescat In Pace
Registered
Joined
Oct 17, 2005
Messages
13,050
Reaction score
3,525
Age
57
Website
www.trumpstump2016.com
I don't see anything wrong with that.

It's not like a D&D group that seems to require at least one PC for non-magic ranged attack purposes.

(At least, every group that I ever played in or DM-ed had one PC with a bow and ranged attack skills. Except CP2020 and Shadowrun; we all had guns.)

Hell, I even had a nobleman who was skilled at the bow in my Megatraveller campaign, for those worlds we went to with high law, in case we couldn't go into town packing.
 

dpaterso

Also in our Discord and IRC chat channels
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Feb 12, 2005
Messages
18,805
Reaction score
4,600
Location
Caledonia
Website
derekpaterson.net
What are local weather conditions like? A Slipstream-like world with permanent high or even gale-force winds would play havoc with archery, just for example's sake. Maybe sorcerous in nature.

-Derek
 

kuwisdelu

Revolutionize the World
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Sep 18, 2007
Messages
38,197
Reaction score
4,544
Location
The End of the World
It's been a long time since I've written fantasy. My last attempt at a fantasy novel though, I ended up with an amazing epic set in an epic fantasy island with an extremely epic history I'd made up. My characters were to set out on an awesome epic quest to destroy teh Evil force. Epically.

And all that good jazz.

However, my world had neither magic, nor fantasy races. Just humans. Plain, ordinary humans.

I'm ready for my stoning now.
 

AceTachyon

Odd person
Super Member
Registered
Joined
Apr 22, 2005
Messages
6,456
Reaction score
975
Location
The Lair, WA
Website
www.abnersenires.com
It's been a long time since I've written fantasy. My last attempt at a fantasy novel though, I ended up with an amazing epic set in an epic fantasy island with an extremely epic history I'd made up. My characters were to set out on an awesome epic quest to destroy teh Evil force. Epically.

And all that good jazz.

However, my world had neither magic, nor fantasy races. Just humans. Plain, ordinary humans.

I'm ready for my stoning now.
Precursor to Martin's Song of Ice and Fire?
 

dclary

Unabashed Mercenary
Poetry Book Collaborator
Requiescat In Pace
Registered
Joined
Oct 17, 2005
Messages
13,050
Reaction score
3,525
Age
57
Website
www.trumpstump2016.com
It's been a long time since I've written fantasy. My last attempt at a fantasy novel though, I ended up with an amazing epic set in an epic fantasy island with an extremely epic history I'd made up. My characters were to set out on an awesome epic quest to destroy teh Evil force. Epically.

And all that good jazz.

However, my world had neither magic, nor fantasy races. Just humans. Plain, ordinary humans.

I'm ready for my stoning now.

Maybe you'd really written alternate universe historical fiction?
 

dclary

Unabashed Mercenary
Poetry Book Collaborator
Requiescat In Pace
Registered
Joined
Oct 17, 2005
Messages
13,050
Reaction score
3,525
Age
57
Website
www.trumpstump2016.com
I wasn't aware there was a market for such a thing.

Do prophecies count as magic?

In an infinite number of universes, yes. Somewhere alternate universe historical fiction is a thriving genre.

And prophecies are, in my opinion, always self-fulfilling magic. People go out of their way to avoid them or fulfill them, and in doing so, do so.
 

Ruv Draba

Banned
Joined
Dec 29, 2007
Messages
5,114
Reaction score
1,322
Anyhoo, anyone else get through their Fantasy WIP (especially if you're writing high fantasy) and realize you've not included all the staples of the genre? (Isn't a hot-shot sharpshooting archer required today?)
`The genre' dates from at least the Epic of Gilgamesh, which makes it 4,600 years old or so. Other than a hero and a quest there are no staples -- and authors have managed to do without even those.

High Fantasy is 50-70 years old, depending on how you count it, but its roots draw all the way back to Gilgamesh. You just need a hero, a good vs evil theme, fantastical symbolism, travel and character development. (Of these, only the good vs evil theme and the character development differentiate High Fantasy from Gilgamesh).

High Fantasy is a psychological journey through a moral landscape, portrayed as symbol. So if you have an ensemble cast then frequently, group members will represent moral and psychological traits of heroism -- often in complementary pairs: the mature and immature; logical and emotional; brave and fearful; knowledgeable and ignorant; compassionate and cruel; honest and dishonest; clever and slow; loyal and treacherous; conformists and individualists; etc... In addition to appearing as personality these traits can also be represented through group function; social background; appearance and props.

An 'archer' character typically represents quick-wittedness, precision, mental agility and clear-sightedness. These are critical heroic traits. Most heroes (other than the Hulk maybe) live by their wits. These traits can be represented through group function (like hunter, tracker, scout, thief, lookout, negotiator), social background (sailor; diplomat; courier; pilot; bard; stockman; acrobat; knife-thrower; pitcher/bowler; motorcyclist) or appearance & props (elf; horse; hawk; ferret; greyhound; arrow; spear; knife; rifle; boomerang; blowgun; bullwhip -- or anything that looks long-sighted, long-reaching, quick and preferably long and thin in shape). I once wrote a high fantasy where my 'archer' character was a knife-spirit.

I recall somewhere a study of American tribal legends which said that the 'core' mythic group for native Americans was a warrior, a hunter, a shaman and a a fool. The archer is the hunter of course: the eyes of the group, often its fingers, feet or mouth, but not usually its mind or heart.

'Archer' characters may tend toward laconicness, irony or cynicism because their far-sightedness gives them insights that they can't always share. By the same token, they're not usually the wisest or bravest in the group so their vision may make them secretly fearful, even desperate. They're frequently solitary or lonely characters by nature, difficult to understand. They're generally accurate in their vision and often loyal (because if the eyes betray the group, it's blind), but their vision can be blunted by fear or humiliation. Their quickness and lean resilience may hide an inner fragility and brittleness. Once wounded, an 'archer' character seldom heals well -- so they often avoid injury, though they generally embrace risk.

Hope that this helps.
 
Last edited:

Sarpedon

Banned
Joined
Jan 20, 2008
Messages
2,702
Reaction score
436
Location
Minnesota, USA
In the Popul Vuh there aren't any archers, but they have blowguns.

And you are right, I don't remember any archery in the epic of Gilgamesh.
 

dclary

Unabashed Mercenary
Poetry Book Collaborator
Requiescat In Pace
Registered
Joined
Oct 17, 2005
Messages
13,050
Reaction score
3,525
Age
57
Website
www.trumpstump2016.com
An 'archer' character typically represents quick-wittedness, precision, mental agility and clear-sightedness. These are critical heroic traits. Most heroes (other than the Hulk maybe) live by their wits. These traits can be represented through group function (like hunter, tracker, scout, thief, lookout, negotiator), social background (sailor; diplomat; courier; pilot; bard; stockman; acrobat; knife-thrower; pitcher/bowler; motorcyclist) or appearance & props (elf; horse; hawk; ferret; greyhound; arrow; spear; knife; rifle; boomerang; blowgun; bullwhip -- or anything that looks long-sighted, long-reaching, quick and preferably long and thin in shape). I once wrote a high fantasy where my 'archer' character was a knife-spirit.

Hope that this helps.

Great. My heroes are dim-witted.

:|

I KNEW IT!
 
Status
Not open for further replies.