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Hi, I'm looking for feedback on my WIP contemporary romance novel. I have a beta, but she's been very busy lately, so my most recent couple of chapters are unread.
My Livejournal site: http://community.livejournal.com/ktaylorfiction/
Membership is required to read the novel - just trying to protect myself a bit.
There are 10 chapters of (15) posted.
Title: Second Chances
Beth thinks Jacob only sees her as an employee, but when she's in a serious accident, things change.
Beth and Jacob have known each other since high school. His music career takes off once he's graduated and an adult, and they don't see each other for years. Flash-forward to Beth being 26, and working for Jacob for 3 years as his Personal Assistant. He's a big star, and basically takes her for granted. When she's in a serious car accident, in the hospital in a coma, he starts to realize that she's meant more to him for a long time then he thought. Meanwhile, Beth is dreaming of a different life, and decides to make a lot of changes once she wakes up and begins recovery - including resigning her job with Jacob. Months later, he invites her to his local concert to tell her how he feels about her - and it takes quite a bit of convincing for her to believe he's serious.
The story is currently dealing with their budding dating relationship, and Beth's fears that she can't fit in with Jacob's pop star life as a love interest.
Any typos are entirely my fault. I haven't put the completely cleaned up chapters on the site, yet.
I hope you guys will give it a shot...
My Livejournal site: http://community.livejournal.com/ktaylorfiction/
Membership is required to read the novel - just trying to protect myself a bit.
There are 10 chapters of (15) posted.Title: Second Chances
Beth thinks Jacob only sees her as an employee, but when she's in a serious accident, things change.
Beth and Jacob have known each other since high school. His music career takes off once he's graduated and an adult, and they don't see each other for years. Flash-forward to Beth being 26, and working for Jacob for 3 years as his Personal Assistant. He's a big star, and basically takes her for granted. When she's in a serious car accident, in the hospital in a coma, he starts to realize that she's meant more to him for a long time then he thought. Meanwhile, Beth is dreaming of a different life, and decides to make a lot of changes once she wakes up and begins recovery - including resigning her job with Jacob. Months later, he invites her to his local concert to tell her how he feels about her - and it takes quite a bit of convincing for her to believe he's serious.
The story is currently dealing with their budding dating relationship, and Beth's fears that she can't fit in with Jacob's pop star life as a love interest.
Any typos are entirely my fault. I haven't put the completely cleaned up chapters on the site, yet.
I hope you guys will give it a shot...