I just posted my 3rd attempt at revisions to my erotic interracial romance novel for your review and critique. For those of you who critiqued my previous versions of this piece, I owe you my immense gratitude. You have help my writing by leaps and bounds. I took your advice to heart and did my best to incorporate most of your suggestions in this newest revision, especially the Show, Don't Tell adage. I hope this is an improvement. As always, your inciteful, constructive critiques are welcomed and appreciated.
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