Here is another MG novel I need some feedback on. This is the first of two novels I wrote about a preteen boy who moves to an enchanted city.
I worked on this for two and a half years before I had to set it aside because I couldn't make it work.
Now having gone back to it, I did some serious grunt work to update it and fix things that I wasn't able to before. Still, I need a new set of eyes to give me insight.
It's past the first draft stage, but might be a tad rough in places as I wrote it in multiple viewpoints and I need some advice on keeping things coherent.
Let me know if your interested.