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I don't know if there's any demand for this, but I thought it might be fun to go through TS Eliot's epic The Waste Land, just seeing what we make of it. For those who haven't read it, here's the full text.

I'm not sure how big chunks to take this in, but I'm going to kick off with just a few lines, and then post a few questions at the end which might make good discussion points. Feel free to ignore them if they give you flashbacks to English Lit lessons.

I. THE BURIAL OF THE DEAD

APRIL is the cruellest month, breeding
Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing
Memory and desire, stirring
Dull roots with spring rain.
Winter kept us warm, covering
Earth in forgetful snow, feeding
A little life with dried tubers.


And the questions:

What's so bad about April? Isn't February actually a sight crueller?

How can winter be keeping us warm?

What is that dried tubers reference about?

Is there a discernible metre here?

What's the point in having a couple of lines rhyming, but not in any obvious pattern?
 

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I wish I knew where my Annotated Eliot went.

I'll search online and get back to you. I haven't thought about this one in years (though it was a favorite at one time).
 

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I think Eliot is speaking of the longing for life which in his view can not be obtained.
The start of Spring, is therefore but a unsettling tease, in his eyes, like a costly garment in a shop window which impoverished pedestrians can only glance and sigh at as they dart by.
 

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I believe that "mixing memory and desire, stirring dull roots" is really the core of the passage.

With this perspective, I can understand why April might be torturous.

the state of being "warm", neither hot or cold, can indicate there is a condition of being sedate, comfortable in the "deadland" of forgetfulness.

"feeding a little life with dried tubers", "tubers" being roots, that there is some connection, some rememberance of what "spring", indicative of passion, desires; desires that have been covered by winter, put on ice.

The passage speaks of the life/death cycle, age/youth, passion/alienation.
 
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So can we collectively conclude that Eliot's not being literal when he's talking about April's cruelty? To me, it seems that at this point he's talking about the unpleasantness of awakening, that being (metaphorically) dead is in some sense a comforting state. When he calls this section 'The Burial of the Dead', does he mean the process of interment itself, or the state of being buried?

And while we're on the subject, what is the Waste Land, exactly? Is it death? Forgetfulness? Awakening?
 

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So can we collectively conclude that Eliot's not being literal when he's talking about April's cruelty? To me, it seems that at this point he's talking about the unpleasantness of awakening, that being (metaphorically) dead is in some sense a comforting state.

In some moods, I get a very literal read of it. Winter: Stay inside, where it's warm, cut back on most activities; maybe the snow takes out communications. Or, if you're a tuber, stay alive and warm but you don't have to *do* anything. Meditate in long slow thoughts. Then comes spring, like an alarm clock. Up and at 'em! One part of you is in a hurry to bloom, to get moving, to get out and do stuff. The other part's going...but, cozy? fireside? bed?

Of course, in other moods, it's all a metaphor for birth and rebirth, emotional and mental as well as physical.

And while we're on the subject, what is the Waste Land, exactly? Is it death? Forgetfulness? Awakening?

I thought it was Life.
 

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I studied this at University and despite that being around 34 years ago, I remember many of the debates. This is what I recall as being the gist of the discussions:
The "Burial of the Dead" relates to getting rid of anything that is not procreation/fertility.
"APRIL is the cruellest month" - the discomfort of not allowing things to stay as they are, but to force new growth
"breeding Lilacs out of the dead land" - producing something of beauty out of what looks like nothing
"mixing Memory and desire" - creating life based on what has happened before but it's still something new and going through procreation again
"stirring Dull roots with spring rain." - the rain is prompting the apparently dead roots to come back to life
"Winter kept us warm, covering Earth in forgetful snow", the dormant period in nature, suggestion of hibernation
"feeding A little life with dried tubers." - the gradual coming to life of nature.

My Eng Lit lecturer claimed the entire poem was about sex and in retrospect I wonder whether that was a highly personal perspective! There is a recurring image of water and fertility...
 

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My Eng Lit lecturer claimed the entire poem was about sex and in retrospect I wonder whether that was a highly personal perspective! There is a recurring image of water and fertility...

I'm a bit too young to remember, but wasn't everyone a bit sex-obsessed in the 1970s? It'd be terribly disappointing if it turned out it was all about procreation.
 

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Why disappointed? It's the root of everything on, above and inside the earth...:D even though as a topic it has been trivialised and devalued in some quarters... call it "life" then...
Seriously, when we get to later parts you can see "water" as a recurring theme. There's a whole load of classical references too as I remember... I will dig out my Faber Book of Verse later and have another look at those hopefully it will jog my memory a bit.
Thanks for starting this thread, The Wasteland is my all-time favourite poem.
 

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One of the things Eliot is doing in this bit is alluding to, and responding to, the opening of Chaucer's Canterbury Tales:

WHAN that Aprille with his shoures soote 1
The droghte 2 of Marche hath perced to the roote,
And bathed every veyne in swich 3 licour,
Of which vertu engendred is the flour;

Which, roughly, in Modern English goes:

When April, with its sweet showers
Has pierced the drought of March to the core
And bathed every vein with sweet liquid
Which causes flowers to bud;

It's also worth noting that the poem as published is quite different from the poem Elliot actually wrote; Ezra Pound not only provided the annotations at the end, he extensively revised the poem itself. Your library might have a copy of the facsimile of Elliots' own version.
 

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and another one, from the 13th century, that starts similarly:

Bytuene Mersh and Averil,
When spray biginneth to springe,
The lutel foul hath hire wyl
On hyre lud to synge.

Between March and April,
When the twigs begin to leaf,
The little bird is free,
to sing her song.

So maybe Eliot was giving the start of Waste Land a bit of ironic pomp by embarking in a manner steeped in tradition?
 

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So maybe Eliot was giving the start of Waste Land a bit of ironic pomp by embarking in a manner steeped in tradition?

Yep; there's a name for this trope; it's called a reverte, or "re-greening," and it's about the return of spring and fertility to the land, and thus, metaphorically, to people.
 

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I've never studied poetry so, I've never studied this poem.

While reading the passage, I detected the lament of someone who either because of advanced age or detachment or "bad history with relationships" was bemoaning the dichotomy between poet's condition and all that spring represents.

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I've never studied poetry so, I've never studied this poem.

Me neither. It's great that there are people around who have studied this poem, and I plan on learning as much as I can from them (I've just added the word reverte to my vocabulary), but hopefully this won't become purely a thread for academics. There can't be too many people in poetry who haven't read the Waste Land or don't have an opinion about it.

I've been thinking about this April is the cruellest month line. It's become so much a part of the language that it no longer seems perverse. Every spring I'll hear at least one weather forecaster announce the coming of a cold front over the Bay of Biscay with the words, 'well, they do say April is the cruellest month.' But spring is traditionally a time of renewal. I've read loads of Russian poetry, and I can't imagine Nekrasov, say, with his General Frost marching through the forest freezing a widow to death at the grave of her husband, saying that winter was warm and April cruel.

Then I got to wondering if there could have been a sense for Eliot in which April was literally, and not just metaphorically, cruel. Eliot lived in Britain throughout the First World War, and most of the major offensives in France took place in the warmer months. Once the autumn rains came and the battlefields turned to mud, a relative period of peace would come. Perhaps a certain forgetfulness did arrive with winter, but with the certain knowledge that, come spring, the military offensives would recommence. I've often wondered if one of the influences on this poem, particularly in this first section, is the trenches of Flanders.
 

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read Nekrasov for the first time last year.
Dostoyevsky and other Russian novelists of the era were very fond of him, for good reason.
Like Elliot's, his work is also bleak and sublime.
 

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That moment in Nekrasov when General Frost turns into her husband and freezes her to death is just about the saddest thing I've ever read. It literally brings tears to my eyes, and I'm usually not at all sentimental about fictional characters.
 

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sounds good to me.
ps General Frost sounds like a good read.
Will have to look for it in the library.
 

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Anis - if you want I can PM you a translated version of it. The full title is Moroz, krasnyi nos, or Frost, the Red-Nosed, which sounds rather jolly but isn't at all.

Kid - I'll put it up later today
 

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This is about "burying the dead." April is the cruelest month because the ground thaws enough to lay those who died during the winter to rest in the ground. One forgets his grief under that blanket of snow, and the warmth of spring is no comfort when you're laying your friends in the ground.

This poem is about WWI, the dead soldiers coming home in body bags, the survivors hacked to pieces by machine guns and bombs and the horrors of modern warfare, the people of England not sure of anything anymore, who will live, who will die, how life will go on after the war. The wasteland is the wartorn land, the waste of its people to death or disfigurement, and the lack of faith during/after a horrifying war.

My favorite line is "Hurry up, please, it's time," the barkeep telling everyone to go home. That song "Closing Time" by Semisonic reminds me of TS Eliot every time. "Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end." TS Eliot couldn't see a new beginning coming from the war, his outlook is bleak, hence "The Wasteland."

And if my memory is a bit fudged after being many years out of college, I apologize now to the true Wasteland scholars.

Erin, remembering off the top of her head.
 
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This week's section is a little longer, but it all seems to fit together:


Summer surprised us, coming over the Starnbergersee
With a shower of rain; we stopped in the colonnade,
And went on in sunlight, into the Hofgarten,
And drank coffee, and talked for an hour.
Bin gar keine Russin, stamm' aus Litauen, echt deutsch.
And when we were children, staying at the archduke's,
My cousin's, he took me out on a sled,
And I was frightened. He said, Marie,
Marie, hold on tight. And down we went.
In the mountains, there you feel free.
I read, much of the night, and go south in the winter


My translation of the line in German is:

I'm not a Russian (woman) at all, I'm originally from Lithuania, real German

The Starnbergersee is Lake Starnberg, in Southern Bavaria. Presumably the Hofgarten is the one in Munich, capital of Bavaria.

For me, the obvious questions to ask about this section are about the Marie and her place in the poem. What's her story? Why does Eliot mention her? What can we surmise about her? Is there a real life individual behind her?
 

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there's a presumable connection being made between the sleigh riding in this stanza:

My cousin's, he took me out on a sled,
And I was frightened. He said, Marie,
Marie, hold on tight. And down we went.


and the snow in the first one from Burial of the Dead, up top:

Winter kept us warm, covering
Earth in forgetful snow,
 

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As usual, I`m late in coming to this, but Eliot is one of the reasons I attempt to write poetry and I wanted to throw my tuppence (two cents ) worth in.
The poem was written in 1922, not long after the horrors of World War 1-the "wasteland" could be construed as the moral and physical condition of Europe in this era. (or perhaps of the author).

April is the cruellest month-April is traditionally the month in which Christ was crucifed-hence the "cruellest month"-alternatively spring is associated with young love, which can be extremely cruel.
Winter kept us warm-The paradox suggests a love affair-ie the couple are kept indoors.
A little life with dried tubers-there are religious allusions throughout the poem. Has the affair grown cold, but not quite died?
Modernism actually pulled down the barriers of strict metre and rhythm- Eliot was quoted as saying that he could not remember the names of various metres.
Irregular rhyming was (is) quite a common feature of modernism-it allows certain lines or section of a poem to "stand out"-(it can be allusive-ie this part is in harmony, this not so).
BTW, the original title of The Wasteland was "He Do The Police in Different Voices", which is a quote from Charles Dickens "Our Mutual Friend" and perhaps gives a hint of what was in Eliot`s mind. He uses many different voices where the lines of gender are often blurred. Strange visions are incorporated with fragments of memory, along with lines from Dante, Sanskrit text and the Bible.
Dark and confusing, but IMO opinion, brilliant.
 

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wow, I was about a million miles off target with my own interpretation.
Stick around and help out with the rest of Wasteland, if you can, Dylan.
That'd be cool.
 

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The brilliance of the Waste Land is certain. I doubt whether any one interpretation can ever be the correct one, mainly because there are so many points which you can read in more than one way. Eliot would surely have been aware of this, and since he published it in this form, he mustn't have minded too much.

Marie's little story has always guess me. My best interpretation is that she's an exiled member of a rich German family. I'd always taken that fact that she's from Lithuania to mean that she was from Memelland, the north-easternmost strip of Germany which was incorporated into Lithuania after WW1. However, my friend google informs me that the annexation didn't take place until 1923, just after the Waste Land was published. I don't know if a Memelland German in the early 1920s would have thought of themselves as coming from Litauen. Before WW1, Lithuania was part of Russia proper, so, if Marie was exiled, it could have been because of the outbreak of war between Germany and Russia in 1914. Or maybe she's from an earlier period or no time period at all. I'm just speculating.

Anyway, Marie's an exile from the extremely fringes of German-speaking Europe, marked by her accent as an outsider to the point where she has to assert her Germanness. Certainly she's rich, given her ability to travel around and her relationship with an archduke. Wikipedia locates the title of archduke within the former Holy Roman Empire, which never extended anywhere near Lithuania, and was more commonly associated with the Habsburgs. Their empire in Eliot's lifetime was entirely outside modern Germany, and again nowhere near Lithuania. To modern ears, archduke immediately summons up images of Archduke Franz Ferdinand, whose death kicked off the whole WW1 shooting match. I don't know whether in 1921 or so the word archduke would have been taken by Eliot's readers to mean Franz Ferdinand specifically.

I'm with Anis in seeing Marie's (in my interpretation, pre-exile) childhood as relating to the warm winter of L5. She remembers glorious, exhilarating adventures in her lost childhood home, and she whiles away her adulthood in passivity, at leisure resorts, drinking coffee and reading through the night. She goes south because of its warmth: she associates snow with her lost childhood, and doesn't want to be reminded of it.

Like I said, just my speculation.