When the Good Guy Becomes the Villian

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Sirion

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Now, this is something that has been happening to me recently. I've been working on my novel, and on a main character I absolutely love, but every time I finish a chapter I see him getting darker and darker. Unlike some, I do not work with a solid outline (other than maybe a general direction), and so it was a surprise to me when I decided (or rather my main character decided) that he was to be a villain. He hasn't allied himself with the other villain he was against, but rather is now independently evil in his own right.

Honestly though, I think I like him even better as a villain than I did as a hero. Odd much?

So, I wonder, do I stay over his shoulder? Do I keep telling the story as if he was still the good guy, or do I divert to other characters whose lives are now affected by his shift. Do I pick a new MC, or rather a 'side MC' to follow? (Using 3rd person, omniscient btw, but even then focusing on certain characters is important)

Aside from that little tidbit helping me, perhaps you could also tell me if you've had a similar issue. Has someone in your story started out good, pure even, and been through so much hellfire that the character just had to be corrupted.

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I'd let him get darker. There is nothing wrong about an anti-hero or anti-villain.

It's common for me to have this happen on a conceptual level. I will write one story with a particular character as the hero. That story won't work out, or will metamorphosis into something else. The character tends to return in another story, this time as a villain.

I've also done villain-to-hero changes (In the novel I'm editing now, for example). This doesn't happen to me as much anymore, but it's played a significant part in the past.
 

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Ask yourself: your readers will like it?
If the answer is "hell, yes!" then go for it.

Otherwise, maybe it's the time that you outline.
 

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I agree. There is nothing that says the MC has to be a good guy hero. Anti heros are becoming more and more popular
 

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I think that people (=readers) are tired of he too-good-to-be true hero.
For one, I am.
 

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I agree. If he wants to be bad and that works for you, go for it.

I had a slightly similar occurrence in my last novel. I thought my MC was going to be a tough good girl, but she ended up being sarcastic and nasty. I wasn't going to change her--she is who she is--but I worried that she was too mean. My beta readers loved her, though. One of them commented that my MC said and did what every woman secretly wanted to say and do!
 

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I think if you follow your current course it may end up going somewhere quite unexpected but interesting. Who knows, maybe this "good guy" was supposed to be bad all along.

It might end up changing the theme/point of the story (if it had one), but that's not necessarily a bad thing. It just means you'll end up writing a story different from the one you expected to write. The theme could end up being how bad things might turn us into bad people if we're not careful, and that's something that readers can identify with or understand.

Plus I think the story might derail if you decide to switch to another protagonist/POV character by now. The reader might get so caught up in the changes this guy is going through that to switch the focus to another good guy could be a disappointment. "Hey! Why are we following this person? I wanted to know what's going to happen to the other guy...!"

So I'd say just keep following the current protagonist and see where he ends up. If it's not where you wanted, you can always redo it. *shrug*

I can't say that I've ever had this happen to my characters, though I'd like to try it sometime! :D
 

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Hey this is great! Your character is deciding where he goes, how he develops. Read it through and make sure it convinces you. Have someone else read it and see if it convinces them.
 

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By all means, follow the story! It's the only thing that matters. You don't have to judge who is good and who is bad, you don't have to take sides or make readers take them, you only need an exciting, engaging, plausible story. If you are good at characterization, your MC will be interesting anyway.

I'm like you: no outline, only a general plan. Recently I experienced something similar to you. The MC in my short story generally turned out worse than I thought: ruthless and cruel to the point of being psychopatic, with her own unique code of conduct, with complete disregard for the lives of others, and at the same time generous and sentimental. I let her be, because her being a monster didn't change the course of the story much.

Maybe in writing, good and bad, beautiful and ugly are all in the eye of the beholder, and all we have to do is to write down the thing and let the readers get of it what they want.
 

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Go with it.

One of my heroes started out good, slipped and slipped and slipped, and turned into a right barstard when he was pushed too far.

I have another who IS a right barstard, but he's trying hard to reform himself.

And I've another who LIKES being a right barstard. It's often the fastest way out of a problem so far as he's concerned.

But they ALL have to deal with the consequences of their acts. That's the down side of being baaaad.
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I agree with everyone, keep plowing int he direction your MC is leading you.

My MC is bad by nature but is TRYING to be good. We'll see how she ends up in the end, on the good side or the bad side. That's the fun of writing without an outline :D You don't feel restricted to what you preplanned (not that every writer does anyway if they do outlines, but you get my drift).
 

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Follow the most interesting guy. If that's your new villain, go with it. I love evil.
 

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Let your character become evil if you like the resulting story. Make sure he'll deal with the consequences of his actions, don't try to find excuses for his behaviour and don't be afraid to go too far. Stories of good guys who become villains are few. That's good, you have something different.
 

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People change with every experience and so should your character. If circumstances turned him into a darker character, by all means do it. I did it to my MC. Beat the boy out of him.

One thing I can suggest would be to keep at least one part of his old self with him. A habit. A certain aspect of his personality. That way the readers can still connect him to the person he once was.
 
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