Cold, Wet and Just Plain Scared

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Omed

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Okay -- just 'new'.

Recently I started to blog and that renewed my interest in all of my favorite things: writing, knitting, crocheting, and ~painting~.

I've been blogging for about a month as an adjunct to more base web-based activities (selling stuff :) and, not my plan, the blogging has occupied more of my interest than the selling.

It takes forever to sell stuff on the internet anyway :).

Here is my bio:

I live in Columbus, Ohio. I will be 40 in March (/cry). I've been with the same guy (marriage number 2) for nine years. We have two kids between us (Boxer Dogs). I work in State government.

Here is my issue:

I would NOT lke to get published or find an agent so much as FINISH the project I've been working on for about two years. I have about 160 pages. It is a fast paced, comedic mystery.

Recently, I think I realized that the reason I became 'blocked' (read stymied, annoyed, bitter, frustrated) was because I managed to lose the Voice of my main character admist huge exposition.

That, I fear, is about skill -- integrating both Voice and dull-plot-line together to produce a readable Work.

Ideas on what to do? I hate to start over.

Thanks!

Omed
http://painteddelivery.blogspot.com
 
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Greetings and :welcome: join on in
 

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Welcome to AW!

The best thing to do is just write. Write and write some more. Cut what ends up not working and keep what does. If you cannot write on this, start something else and maybe a flash will cause you to return to your first work and finish it. Maybe not. But, you cannot finish if you do not just sit down and keep plugging away.

Good luck!
 

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Go back to where you were last happy and flush it from that point on. Then write again.

Read the throw-away stuff and underline anything that's really important, that needs to be in the story. Think of a fun way to tell it. If it's information, figure out when the reader needs to know each little bit and incorporate those little bits into the story at that point. It will usually work its way in pretty naturally. And be skeptical. It's amazing what readers don't really need to know.

And welcome. ;)
 

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Hi Omed. Welcome to the AW Forums! :Sun: Just start looking around at the different threads and I know you'll find the help you are looking for. There are many professionals who hang out here and are always willing to help. Good luck. :)
 

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Hey, Omed, :welcome: to the cooler. Hope your writer's block goes away and you'll get your muse back very soon. The members here are super!
 

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I also like to crochet and write, too. Can't knit or paint, and I can't solve your problem. Have you checked out "Uncle Jim's" Writing thread in the Novel Writing Forum. I've learned a lot from it, and am less than halfway through. Welcome to AW.
 

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Welcome to AW, Omed! Here's a suggestion: While you're knitting or crocheting, try not to think of anything at all. Don't worry, don't watch TV, don't rehash the day's events, don't wonder what you're going to fix for dinner or how to get your writing back on track. Just let the repetitive actions of your hands put your busy left brain to sleep. This will allow your creative right brain to work on the novel while you're not even aware of it. (With me, it's pulling weeds that does the trick. But anything that doesn't require a high level of conscious thought should work. The challenge is not to think about anything else, either.) When you open up that book file again, you might find ideas you didn't know were in your head.

Oh, and FYI, turning 40 isn't as terrible as people make it out to be. I wouldn't mind doing it again. :D
 

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From one newbie to the other, welcome aboard the board. I'm spending my entire weekend with two plans--play on AW and READ. Hoping it'll jump start my lagging writing. I've just about overthought everything about my story....
 

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Welcome to AW. Hope you enjoy your stay with us.

How do you like your popcorn?
 

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Welcome! :hi:

Take yourself off to the Novel forum and start reading the Learn Writing With Uncle Jim thread. Best writing course around.

You'll get lots of ideas on how to eliminate your story-stopping info dumps and, if necessary, Uncle Jim will give you permission to write crap (complete with a lovely certificate suitable for framing) to help you power through your block.
 
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