Is s's correct??? Looks very funny

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I'm trying to write this sentence:

Dessert is spelled with two s’s, dammit!

How do I do the whole pluralized s part? I feel like this looks very strange.
 

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"Dessert is spelled with two 's's, dammit!"

I'm trying to write this sentence:

Dessert is spelled with two s’s, dammit!

How do I do the whole pluralized s part? I feel like this looks very strange.
 

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There's haitches so I guess there's also esses. Or asses with itches or...itches...
 

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Regardless of which one is right, they all look a bit awkward, I feel. How about:

'Dessert' has more than one 's', damnit!

...or...

'Dessert' is spelled with another 's', dammit!

...or...

'Dessert' is spelled with a second 's', dammit!
 

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Agreed, they do look awkward as written, but that is how people would say the line... and we can't make dialogue sound unnatural just 'cause we don't know how to write it. :)

-Derek
 

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Yes, I agree, although I don't think the first one sounds unnatural (or the sentence I wrote earlier in this thread). The second two were more in keeping with the original sentence as I don't like altering original sentences that aren't mine too much when the person asking for help hasn't wanted a re-write, but I don't like them as much as my other two. :O)
 

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Collins Concise doesn't have either es or ess as a word. Dictionary.com does, though.
 

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Fowler's Modern blah blah doesn't have it listed, but in the spelling section, letters are written like this:

appalling two ps, two ls
dissipate two s's, one p
embarrass two rs, two s's

etc.
 
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