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Hi again. I am a trained artist. I got into children's books by being hired by a friend to make a picture book. It was a great gig. I have since taken a few classes and written a bunch.

There are some agents that represent writer/illustrators. Is the rejection rate as high for sending in dummies? I just got a reply from an agent that did not mention anything about my story, just that she only represents writer/artists. When I told her of my skills, she wrote send the pics too.

I don't know. I guess it is the power of the story, pictures and text together. It is cheaper and less time consuming to just write stories. It takes me up to two hours to illustrate a spread, just the pencilling. I would rather get a go ahead on a story then illustrate it.
 

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But you get paid for illustrating too - it's not a service you provide free of charge. It sounds like fun. I might try tackling the illustrations for my picture book.
 

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I am not an artist, but I have read interviews with many of my favorites. 2 hours to illustrate a spread is ridiculously fast compared to most, I would say.
 

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I was taught by a full-time storyboard artist. He could finish a watercolor painting 11 x 15 inches in twenty minutes, while discussing the finer points of illustrating, and downing a glass of wine. This was in the evening after work. I work six times slower than him and if you include all the procrastinating 1000's of times slower. Two hours to pencil a two page spread is a reasonable amount of time.
 

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Hi Patrick. I just wrote a children's story on a whim for my granddaughter and asked my daughter if she'd like to do the illustrations, so was reading through the threads here. Funny, because my daughter was just complaining about the same thing as you, that her part of the job was going to take quite a bit longer to do. But the same could be said for the time it takes to come up with a good story in any genre, though the actual writing might seem quick. At least with the illustrations the story is there to work from. So, I guess it's how you look at it.

At any rate, I wish I were better at drawing because I'd love to be in full control. When my girls were young and I'd read to them, the ones we loved best were those with the busiest pictures. I can't speak for anyone but myself, but we never picked a book for the story. It was always the pictures that drew us. So it seems that letting your imagination go a bit crazy in both directions would be the surest way of being remembered.
 

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Hi Kerr,

I have Kerrs in my family. We must be distant cousins. My relations are from Ohio and owned a funeral parlor. You know what, pictures do tell the story. I am going back to the drawing board and putting all that amazing stuff in that no writer could ever get the illustrator to do through a middle-man-publisher. I can imagine getting rejection after rejection for one of my stories because there is so much happening in the pictures that it amounts to the storyteller dictating to the illustrator.
 

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I can imagine getting rejection after rejection for one of my stories because there is so much happening in the pictures that it amounts to the storyteller dictating to the illustrator.

Hurray! I know you are going against the grain. Though children's stories haven't been my playground until lately, I've known other writers in this genre, one who'd had two stories pubbed by Golden Books. Unfortunately, I wasn't impressed with either of them, and thought to myself I that I would have started by querying pubs that supplied the kind of imaginative artists I hoped for, but that requires imaginative stories, as well. Everyone says how best to go about this but being a package deal makes that your starting place.
 

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Your best bet is to write the story and send it in without the illustrations. A lot of the time, publishers like to team up a new author with an established illustrator or a new illustrator with an established author - basically to maximise sales. Picture books are expensive to publish and they need to be sure of sales.

I would also mention the fact that you are an artist and send a selection of your artwork sampling the different styles you paint in - not necessarily relating to the story you are offering (though I would send one relating to that story) The other thing to remember is that being an artist and being an illustrations for books are two different animals. I'm an artist too but I don't think I am competent enough to take on an illustration job yet. Illustration is a lot more about design and taking direction.

As an artist, you paint your vision. As an illustrator, you paint your vision and the editor says, "That's great put can you paint it again and have all the children crawling rather than running." #Actually happened - book about fire safey.

Hope this helped.
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Your best bet is to write the story and send it in without the illustrations. A lot of the time, publishers like to team up a new author with an established illustrator or a new illustrator with an established author - basically to maximise sales. Picture books are expensive to publish and they need to be sure of sales.

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Jeff,

This is exactly the type of advice that has held me back. If I had worked from my comics experience I would have made dummy after dummy and sent them to the agents that ask for author/illustrators. There are a lot of ways to characterise what translates into sales. In PBs, I believe it is the power of the writing and pictures together that make the story and sales. The trend is that agents and editors are considering more author/illustrators recently. Is it because it creates a more unified vision? Is it because the author's vision of the story is better than just using a good illustrator? Is it just the trend in artists becoming better trained at writing stories?

My argument is how do I get all of my visual goals for the story, the style, visual sub-plots, characterizations and mood by writing stage directions?

If I want the illustrations to be done in an art nouveau style and include the action of the main characters and fairies acting out sub plots, machines that look like they grow out of vegetation, and use all types of symbolism, who is going to jump on board until they see it? These things are not mentioned in the story and belong in the illustrations.

I have learned a lot about making PBs through taking classes and reading up on how to approach agents but this little thing about submitting the story first and then mentioning illustrations upon acceptence has slowed me down. It is like applying for a job as an art teacher and failing to mention I have a degree in art on my resume...because the most important part is having the teaching degree.

There are a few agents who only look at PB dummies would you like to know who they are? Check out my Santa book above. Scary pictures only belong in scary books, otherwise don't be afraid to take children along for the ride. Disclaimer...nudity and sex are inappropriate for most children's books.
 
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And another thing for you writers out there, how about finding an illustrator, have them illustrate your story, and send it in as if you are the author/illustrator? Then mention at the end of the story that you are an author illustrator team. It makes the same sense as working with an artist/illustrator. In fact, it makes better sense if you are good match. It sure beats the old way that Jeff so eloquently defined.
 

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Children's Writers: HIRE AN ARTIST!

Hi,

This is something that has got my goad lately. Through researching agents, I have discovered many that want to see PB dummies by author/illustrators. My take on it is that if you are a writer and you can find someone to illustrate your story go for it! The agents are not going to care if it the book was written and illustrated by two people rather than one. They want to see the highest quality PB they can get. They have given up on the old system. Maybe all the old guys are retired? If you can do this yourself do it. If you need to hire an illustrator do that.

My anger comes from the fact that I wrote an illustrated a children's book years ago and it is pretty good. I still want to put it through a very rigorous edit, but it stands well now. It is at the perfect place for it's story and sales will come. Follow the link ...Real Santa http://www.booklab.com/Pages/PageCo...0&pcatid=37c31fca-be31-40c8-888f-ab2581726fe7

I have a couple of dozen books that I am making the dummies for now. It beats spending my time writing and waiting for endless query letters about my stories without showing the editors my skills in bringing these stories to life. People love that Santa Book. I have another picture book waiting in the wings that leaves that book in the dust.

Thanks for the comradery. Good luck,

Patrick


Research

Anna Olswanger looking for artist-illustrators
http://www.lizadawsonassociates.com/agents.html

Book Stop Literary Only if you are an illustrator send a dummy
http://www.bookstopliterary.com/submission.html

Ethan Ellenberg Send color copies of sample illustrations
http://ethanellenberg.com/submissionguidelines.htm
 

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They want to see professional quality dummies if you are a writer/illustrator - not if you are just a writer. Writers should not hire an illustrator for the purpose of having a dummy. Editors want to choose their own illustrators for projects where it is just a writer - and agents know that.
 

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Patrick,
I can understand where you're coming from but please do not assume that every situation is similar to your own. Writers who have been in the business for many years have given you sound advice on your multiple threads, if you do not choose to follow their advice and explore your own path then please do so, we look forward to hearing your progress.

Stacey
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You've got several threads going for this topic. May I ask why? We've given you our advice to the best of our ability. Many people have already told you this approach could possibly work, go for it, you have nothing to lose by trying.

What more would you like us to say?
 

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The advice is here is free. You get what you pay for. You should ignore any advice you don't find useful. Jeff has not personally held you back in any way, he's only trying to explain how, in general, the business works. Of course there are exceptions to every rule.
 

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There's a big difference between "I'm an author and an illustrator" and "I'm an author and I hired an illustrator."

If you're not an illustrator, you don't make up a dummy book with illustrations. It just makes you look like an amateur who didn't do his research beforehand.
 

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Patrick, no one here is trying to argue with your ideas, we're offering advice from years of experience. You're welcome to try whatever method you're comfortable with and we wish you luck.

However, I do think we're getting to the point of talking in circles among these three threads so I will merge after a quick look to make sure I'm not missing anything earth shattering.