Crimson Divinity

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Lowercase Prelude

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Spilled out, raining down love
in blood
Wrath and humanity's treason
were His burden

Torn flesh and new wine
Pouring
Taking the place of sin's genocide

Mockery, tears
Mixed emotions, the crowd jeers
On display, a ransom being paid

A son, a brother, a dear friend

Reaching out, with one voice
to the heavens

It is finished
 

Pat~

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Beautiful! (I love poetry.) And welcome to AW!

By the way, you can post this over in the Share Your Work forums (Christian Writing subforum) if you want a critique. (Let me know if you want me to move it for you.) :)
 
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