'First Page' workshop question - need advice

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I'll be taking a 'First Page' workshop this weekend with agent Betsy Lerner. She'll be going over first page samples and talking about why certain ones made it and others didn't. Participants can also bring in the first page of their novel for her to critique and return. Here's the question: Does 'first page' mean literally only the first page, where the chapter heading and text start a third of the way down the page, or does it mean the first 250 words, meaning I'd bring in the first page and a some of the second page? I know this is nit-picky, but I don't want to turn something in for a big agent to critique that isn't formatted properly, but also want to supply her with the proper amount of material.
 

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In the one I took it meant one page of writing. Start at the top of the page... not 1/3 of the way down. Just have your name and title in the top.
 

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Oh... I was requested to double space, too.
 

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Yeah... it never hurts to bring more... but do not present more. I went to one of these... the focus is on that one page. The editor and agent present both loved my page and said they would definitely ask to see more... but this was inside the confines of the workshop. They didn't actually ask to see more.

It's a good foot in the door if they react positively, though. (when I approached the agent, she loved the manuscript but I didn't like her.)
 

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Yeah... it never hurts to bring more... but do not present more. I went to one of these... the focus is on that one page. The editor and agent present both loved my page and said they would definitely ask to see more... but this was inside the confines of the workshop. They didn't actually ask to see more.

It's a good foot in the door if they react positively, though. (when I approached the agent, she loved the manuscript but I didn't like her.)

A couple of agents asked to see 50 pages of my work. One agent I really liked, and the other, well....

I was only disappointed when the first one said she'd pass.:D
 

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A couple of agents asked to see 50 pages of my work. One agent I really liked, and the other, well....

I was only disappointed when the first one said she'd pass.:D

I don't mind passing on people I don't dig... it helps me to maintain that certain level of mediocrity that I have struggled to live within.
 

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When I participated in a first page workshop they meant exactly that- 1/3 of the way down- just what it would look like in your published novel- You might be prepared for both...
 
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