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Using HE and HIS too much
Because I had a single character entering a sleepy village at night I found myself having to use HE and HIS.
The chapter is 655 words long. (short) and I counted about 18 times I used the word HE. Less for the word HIS (about 5 or 6)
There is a lot of action and movement in the chapter. He appears, enters, searches the streets, arrives at some houses and looks for something that has been lost for a long time. So the words are moving and full of action. But I am wondering if there is a general rule about using HE and HIS too much?
I can't say his name yet, and trying to describe him as a shadow or something different would be confusing.
Is there a rule?
Because I had a single character entering a sleepy village at night I found myself having to use HE and HIS.
The chapter is 655 words long. (short) and I counted about 18 times I used the word HE. Less for the word HIS (about 5 or 6)
There is a lot of action and movement in the chapter. He appears, enters, searches the streets, arrives at some houses and looks for something that has been lost for a long time. So the words are moving and full of action. But I am wondering if there is a general rule about using HE and HIS too much?
I can't say his name yet, and trying to describe him as a shadow or something different would be confusing.
Is there a rule?
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