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first three chapter look? requested partial!

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Hi All:

Well, I had great crits from people on this board and so I rewrote my first 3 chapters. A super good agent just requested to see them and I want to see if they work.

So, I was wondering if anyone could take a quick gander at them and offer suggestions?

It's a fantasy--middle grade to young adult (but I think it has good crossover potential into the adult market).

Thanks!
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Wow, congrats on the agent request. I'm a lowly newbie writer, but I could take a look if you like. I do love love love fantasy and kids fantasy-I've been a fan since I was 7-and I read loads of it.
 
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