I'm asking this because I'm writing a special treat for the May Challenge, and I hopefully I'll finish in time.
It starts off with someone leaving a house in Lily's name, so she owns the house. She enters the master bedroom, and read a diary entry, and there's going to be a couple of POV switches.(I'm scared to do it.) Everytime she reads a diary entry, her mind was sent back 15 years ago and gets a flash back of her mother's past. As she learns about both her mother and her master's past, she learns more about herself, which causes her to change overtime.
I'm writing the diary entries first, then retelling the story which should be more vivid and detailed. I'm afraid this may come across as redundant. I hope I could do it, but I'm not sure if it's a good idea.
Is this a good idea, or is this redundant?
I'm only doing this for the May challenge and I may add this to the book.
It starts off with someone leaving a house in Lily's name, so she owns the house. She enters the master bedroom, and read a diary entry, and there's going to be a couple of POV switches.(I'm scared to do it.) Everytime she reads a diary entry, her mind was sent back 15 years ago and gets a flash back of her mother's past. As she learns about both her mother and her master's past, she learns more about herself, which causes her to change overtime.
I'm writing the diary entries first, then retelling the story which should be more vivid and detailed. I'm afraid this may come across as redundant. I hope I could do it, but I'm not sure if it's a good idea.
Is this a good idea, or is this redundant?
I'm only doing this for the May challenge and I may add this to the book.