Friday night, I had an awful experience with a doctor in the midwifery practice I go to. I'm writing a letter of complaint... we're not ready to take action against her, but want to alert her supervisors of the situation and our feelings.
As a writer, I'm worried about libel suits or presenting accusations or assumptions about her, ahem, incompetence. So, even though it's unconventional, I posted the letter in SYW because I trust you guys!
Is the letter: factual without editorializing, recounting events as they happened? Clear and concise? Still passionate enough to evoke emotion in the reader? and, of course, logically organized?
I can assure you it is ALL true. I only wish I had my tape recorder going, as I know it's legal in NYS to tape conversations as long as ONE of the parties knows it's being taped. (Protection against hidden room taps, but you can tape conversations that you're taking part in.)
http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?p=2795454#post2795454
I would really love feedback! Thanks!
Dawn