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SHIT!!!!! So I start writing poetry here-never wrote the damned stuff before-I never tried to get any of it pubbed-don't need the credits-heh heh! So a friend decides that I have written a damned poem worth reading and he arranges for it to get pubbed in the deepening-now the deepening is going tits up-so much fer me damned poetry carreer-luv Dave

That was fun-I feel betterer-can you tell how upset the poor lobsterino is/ HUH HUH? Can ya? Oh the pain!!!!

It means dear Kimmi that the deepening is going to no longer existipate-which is alright-I can handle it-where is the damned scotch-really I can-honestly-you are so sweet-you sure did write some nice stuff in literarty-Dave

Well hell it was a damned accomplishment but then it got decomplished-cheese whiz-you deciphered on of me posts-that puts you above the madding crowds I suppose!

Oh and if in future you have trouble deciphering a post of mine-well-they are to be totally ignored at all costs!

Alright kids I will and will keep you posted-thanks for the encowragement-I never thought to or tried to get a poem pubbed-then this and that and now I am just realizing that I luv you all-it is the preyevayledge of the unpubbed poet!!!!

Trish what a ya gonna do sweetheart-I think we should really concider the pub-I mean great works are often written in a drunken stupor on napkins while rollicking in a disshevelled state trying to hit on people to prove one is worthy of love-right? Or some Dylan Thomas crap huh? Maybe it is time for us all to head on down to the Algonquin!

dclary said:

I don't want to piss on davids' parade, because any acceptance is a good acceptance...

But it looks like The Deepening just went belly-up.

http://www.thedeepening.com/

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if you'd a read the damned thread you'd see that I already know that-but pissing is a relief they say!

dobiwon said:

Why is it that I'm not surprised that you hold to this particular belief?

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You are not surpriesed dear Don a cause ya knows me-so does Trish as well!!!!

reigningcatsndogs said:

You never wrote poetry before? I think everything you write is poetry!!

Tits up is what I pray for every night!!! (but that's another thread)

Send the damn thing out again, Lobster-Man! It'll get published, and then we can party down!!! I can guarantee that your poem will be picked up long before my 'girls' will!

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I am definately deeply and passionately madly in love with you!!!

S'alright you not bad you just not silly enough on occasionality-Christ I cannot believe there are still folks around that do not get tits up-I suppose that is a good thing and makes them only marginally abreast of the situation! Plus you just wanted to cause me pain which I perfectly understand!!!!

thank you a ray of light in the darkness beams across the threshold of this age-ed spirit!