wow, great thread
Hi everyone, I am new to this board but have been lurking (and reading) for over a week. I have just completed my review of this entire thread and am ready to join in the discussion.
Firstly, I want to thank James for the incredible amount of work he has put into this thread. It is a fabulous tutorial and discussion and I had a happy three days reading it from page 1 all the way through.
I have a few questions, but a little background first. I started my career as a professional journalist (although I am getting out of that now) and one of my earliest writing experiences was as an intern at a very big Canadian magazine. I am so grateful I had that opportunity. The editor-in-chief, who is a brilliant woman, has a very business-like approach to editing that was a good fit for me personality-wise and taught me a very practical lesson early on. Basically, she had no tolerance at all for “I am an artiste” types of writers. Her magazine was a business. It had a target audience so well-defined that before my pitch session (interns got a pitch session at the start of their term and worked on the approved stories for the remainder of their time there) she told me to pretend I was a 37-year-old housewife in rural Alberta with an 8-year-child, and that it’s September. What would be on my mind? What a great lesson to a writer just starting out: have fun, write well, show flair---but do it in a way that will get you printed. That’s not selling out at all. It’s just selling.
I had been writing fiction literally since I was a little kid, and later that same year I had the chance to take a writing class with a real author. She had written two of those immigrant family saga novels so popular in Canada, was married to a big name in Canlit, and was just SO not my type at all
She was a genre snob, for one thing, and she hated my work because it was too whimsical. I became stubborn and our classes turned into a sort of battle of the wills---as one example, she accused my first story of having not enough dialogue, so for the second one I wrote ONLY dialogue
Of course, I rationally know that there is a proper balance between the two. But I wanted to see what she would say about my dialogue. As it turns out, she developed a grudging respect for the way I kept putting myself out there for criticism from her, and she later told me she did find me talented but wanted me to “aim higher than romances and mysteries.” Lesson learned: just because they are published authors does not mean they are g-d, and it certainly does not mean they are always right. For the record I quite enjoy romances and mysteries, especially when they occur in the same book, which I understand is quite a popular trend right now (Kay Hooper, Nora Roberts, Harlequin Intrigue, Karen Harper etc).
Lesson three was Nanowrimo, which I did last year, in which I learned the important idea that 200 pages of people having conversations does not equal a plot. My writing group editor came back to me after reading the draft with many glowing comments about my snappy dialogue. Then she shifted uncomfortably in her chair, looked down and said “now, about the rest of it…” The plot went something like this: a bunch of people who have not seen each other in several years reunite, and spend most of the book yelling at each other. And…well, that’s really the whole plot. I like writing dialogue and know it is my strong point, so I seemed to favor it a little too much. Lesson learned: you cannot write 50,000 words and fail to learn something. Identify your weak points, and work on them. Oh, and if anyone wants to know more about my Nanowrimo experience, my first paid piece of the year was a write-up about it in the e-zine published by Holly Lisle’s web site. And interesting aside, I got a personal note from the editor after I submitted it in which she praised me to the high heavens for following the submission guidelines (i.e. sending it double spaced and in the right font). It seems a lot of people don’t follow guidelines. You can earn serious brownie points just by doing what you’re told!
I know this post is veering on the long side, so I’ll slip in my first question and then sign off for now. I am wondering what you think of writing exercises. People always give me books with them (and in fact one contains nearly every ‘lesson’ we did in the writing class I took with the well-known author. Stunning coincidence?) So---waste of time, or useful skill-builder?
Joanna
p.s. if anyone is inetersted in some great writing links and article links, I compiled some for my writing group here:
www.geocities.com/ficbot/toronto.htm