One of my beta readers said, "I really like your story and the characters, but the book seems a bit thin." She added, "I mean, I read books like that and like them--and I liked yours. I just thought I'd mention it." She reads mostly literary fiction, and mine is an adventure story, but I am still wrestling with her comment.
My story, 109000wc, has pathos, persecution, a moral dilemma, guilt, betrayal, treason, executions, a Butch Cassidy-type chase, and a failed love affair; she is not talking about length or plot. (By the way, all those elements except for the love affair, which was meant to lighten the story, are integral.) On thinking it over, I realize there is enough here for Trollope or Rowland, but as an unpublished novelist, I doubt I should make my novel longer.
I take her comment seriously because it reflects so painfully my own doubts, but I struggle to know what to do. One of my writing teachers called my style "spare," but I don't think that is what this reader meant.
So what do I do:
Shop it anyway and go on to the next?
Put it in a drawer?
Give up and go back to my day job?
Fix it? Is there some new way I can look at my work to see what I have actually written as opposed to what I think I have written?
My story, 109000wc, has pathos, persecution, a moral dilemma, guilt, betrayal, treason, executions, a Butch Cassidy-type chase, and a failed love affair; she is not talking about length or plot. (By the way, all those elements except for the love affair, which was meant to lighten the story, are integral.) On thinking it over, I realize there is enough here for Trollope or Rowland, but as an unpublished novelist, I doubt I should make my novel longer.
I take her comment seriously because it reflects so painfully my own doubts, but I struggle to know what to do. One of my writing teachers called my style "spare," but I don't think that is what this reader meant.
So what do I do:
Shop it anyway and go on to the next?
Put it in a drawer?
Give up and go back to my day job?
Fix it? Is there some new way I can look at my work to see what I have actually written as opposed to what I think I have written?