Friends, countrymen (and countrywomen), hell, non-countrymen/countrywomen, fellow writers...lend me your ears.
I have a couple of questions in regard to dialogue. I'm interested in all opinions and feedback that you have to offer.
First, in my WIP, several characters have the ability to communicate via telepathy. With that in mind, when a conversation is taking place between them, should the dialogue be italicized and in quotes?
Example:
"Where do you think you're going with that suitcase, Ben?" She asked without voice.
He turned back to face her and, without the slightest movement of his lips, replied "What's the difference?" He nodded toward the crumpled body on the floor. "He won't be needing it anymore."
I realize, naturally, there is a distinct rule that internal thoughts should be in italics. Nevertheless, is there a definitive rule for when a telepathic conversation is taking place?
Secondly -- long winded dialogue. I have one scene where a character is enlightening a group of people as to a conspiracy that has taken place in the world for hundreds of years. There is so much to be said that I worry the dialogue, itself, may reverse its intended purpose. Dialogue is supposed to draw a reader in to the story, not pull them out. What he's saying is key and, IMHO, fresh; not to mention pertinent to the plot continuance. My worry is that you don't see, in stories today, dialogue from one character that runs close to an entire page at times. Sure, I can -- and have -- broken it up at times between the use of the narrative filling in some of the blanks, or another character interrupting to ask a question. But, there is one point where I simply can't get around delivering a long but, again, IMHO, fruitful speech.
So, I guess my question is: If it's done well, is it okay to have one character, at one point only, deliver extended dialogue? I mean, if he's the only one who knows the facts of a world-wide conspiracy...ya know?
Thanks for your help.
I have a couple of questions in regard to dialogue. I'm interested in all opinions and feedback that you have to offer.
First, in my WIP, several characters have the ability to communicate via telepathy. With that in mind, when a conversation is taking place between them, should the dialogue be italicized and in quotes?
Example:
"Where do you think you're going with that suitcase, Ben?" She asked without voice.
He turned back to face her and, without the slightest movement of his lips, replied "What's the difference?" He nodded toward the crumpled body on the floor. "He won't be needing it anymore."
I realize, naturally, there is a distinct rule that internal thoughts should be in italics. Nevertheless, is there a definitive rule for when a telepathic conversation is taking place?
Secondly -- long winded dialogue. I have one scene where a character is enlightening a group of people as to a conspiracy that has taken place in the world for hundreds of years. There is so much to be said that I worry the dialogue, itself, may reverse its intended purpose. Dialogue is supposed to draw a reader in to the story, not pull them out. What he's saying is key and, IMHO, fresh; not to mention pertinent to the plot continuance. My worry is that you don't see, in stories today, dialogue from one character that runs close to an entire page at times. Sure, I can -- and have -- broken it up at times between the use of the narrative filling in some of the blanks, or another character interrupting to ask a question. But, there is one point where I simply can't get around delivering a long but, again, IMHO, fruitful speech.
So, I guess my question is: If it's done well, is it okay to have one character, at one point only, deliver extended dialogue? I mean, if he's the only one who knows the facts of a world-wide conspiracy...ya know?
Thanks for your help.