areWHYaEN
Its the first part of my first song, but Im stuck on this part
It might be a long chorus, or a chorus and a verse where I just cant find the halfway mark. So could someone help me with this.:grin
Advice: Catch the beat and its pretty catchy.
I could think of a day
When I could Smile
A Day where happiness
lasted more than a mile
A Day where love
was truly worth while
I can think of better days
Tell me you love me
Tell me you need me
Tell me its more than this
Dont tell me its over
For my world would be too
Give me my better days.
It might be a long chorus, or a chorus and a verse where I just cant find the halfway mark. So could someone help me with this.:grin
Advice: Catch the beat and its pretty catchy.
I could think of a day
When I could Smile
A Day where happiness
lasted more than a mile
A Day where love
was truly worth while
I can think of better days
Tell me you love me
Tell me you need me
Tell me its more than this
Dont tell me its over
For my world would be too
Give me my better days.