The good news is this agent thinks I'm competent
The bad news is she's not representing me
Thank you for the opportunity to review your project. I took time to read it today. I wish I had better news. Unfortunately, I'm going to pass. It's always difficult to articulate 'why' a specific piece of fiction doesn't garner the requisite level of enthusiasm. You're a competent author. I didn't, however, fall in love with the plot as I had hoped. My opinion is that of one agent. Surely another agent or editor will feel differently. You might try - www.aar-online.org - list of reputable agents and what each represents. Good luck
The bad news is she's not representing me
Thank you for the opportunity to review your project. I took time to read it today. I wish I had better news. Unfortunately, I'm going to pass. It's always difficult to articulate 'why' a specific piece of fiction doesn't garner the requisite level of enthusiasm. You're a competent author. I didn't, however, fall in love with the plot as I had hoped. My opinion is that of one agent. Surely another agent or editor will feel differently. You might try - www.aar-online.org - list of reputable agents and what each represents. Good luck