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Beta for first 50 pgs of MG Fantasy novel

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I need a beta to help me primarily on pacing and tension. I'm getting the beginning is dragging and needs to be sped up. I can read MG or YA. The story is about a 13 yr old girl that buries herself in the ground every 7 days to survive. Sometimes she comes out of the earth as an animal. Whatever the case, she has to try to find missing children and solve the mystery that goes along with it.

I'd be happy to try whatever genre. Thank you for reading! Hope to hear from you soon.
 

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Hello Undercover - I'd be willing to take a look at this if you want to send me a PM. Thank you!
 

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Hello, I would also be willing to take a look. PM away!
 

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Hi, if you'd be okay beta-reading a flash fiction (roughly 1K words), I'd be very interested to do 3k for your work!
 

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Hi Halion, I would like to swap, that would be great the first 3K words. Would it be okay if I give you a different novel? It's another MG fantasy. PM me if you're interested.
 
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