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Hello.
Sometimes, because there is dust in the sky, the sunset becomes a hazy orange. I decided to describe this situation. Can I use "pall"?
This is what I have right now:
1. The setting sun was a hazy orange because of the pall of dust cast over the sky.
2. The pall of dust had made the setting sun a hazy orange.
Do the collocations I have work? What do you think about it?
How can I make it better?
Sometimes, because there is dust in the sky, the sunset becomes a hazy orange. I decided to describe this situation. Can I use "pall"?
This is what I have right now:
1. The setting sun was a hazy orange because of the pall of dust cast over the sky.
2. The pall of dust had made the setting sun a hazy orange.
Do the collocations I have work? What do you think about it?
How can I make it better?