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Hello.
I hope you are doing well. This is my first thread here and I'm excited. In my signature, I've explained my situation. So I'm going to ask my question:
I'm trying to describe the change of season in a desert area. This is what I have:
The relentless heat of the summer had barely given way to a timid cool. But this was desert and even Septembers refused to be pleasant. We still had to turn on the air conditioner in the car.
How do you think this can be made better?
I hope you are doing well. This is my first thread here and I'm excited. In my signature, I've explained my situation. So I'm going to ask my question:
I'm trying to describe the change of season in a desert area. This is what I have:
The relentless heat of the summer had barely given way to a timid cool. But this was desert and even Septembers refused to be pleasant. We still had to turn on the air conditioner in the car.
How do you think this can be made better?
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