I am writing in first person, present tense. How would you vary sentence structure to avoid over using "I," or words starting with "-ing," to begin sentences.
For example(not from my work!):
Spinning on my heel, I face the truck barreling toward me. The twin orbs from the headlights blind me. I am out of time. Throwing my hands in front of my face, I brace for impact, but it never comes.
Does "I" become invisible to the reader? I started using "-ing" words to vary the beginnings of my sentences but they have gotten out of hand and I need advise on how to readjust. Thanks in advance!
For example(not from my work!):
Spinning on my heel, I face the truck barreling toward me. The twin orbs from the headlights blind me. I am out of time. Throwing my hands in front of my face, I brace for impact, but it never comes.
Does "I" become invisible to the reader? I started using "-ing" words to vary the beginnings of my sentences but they have gotten out of hand and I need advise on how to readjust. Thanks in advance!