Melissa Caruso had a good thread on some of her thoughts when deciding what to show and what not to show:
https://twitter.com/melisscaru/status/1310928164231811073
"Seems like every draft I make mistakes I have to fix in edits, both showing stuff I should skip and skipping stuff I should show.
For instance, EVERY FIRST DRAFT I wind up showing planning scenes I have to cut later (usually because I'm figuring out the plan as I write)."
https://twitter.com/melisscaru/status/1310928164231811073
"Seems like every draft I make mistakes I have to fix in edits, both showing stuff I should skip and skipping stuff I should show.
For instance, EVERY FIRST DRAFT I wind up showing planning scenes I have to cut later (usually because I'm figuring out the plan as I write)."