Is it at least passably punctuationally correct? Thanks.
[FONT="]The airboat hurtled a couple hundred more yards until it plunged into a gully, the engine dead, Earl and Shelby tossed headlong into a mudbank.[/FONT]
[FONT="]The airboat hurtled a couple hundred more yards until it plunged into a gully, the engine dead, Earl and Shelby tossed headlong into a mudbank.[/FONT]