Chase—Ah, the creative process.
Why is it so much work? Good luck with your road bump.
Taylor—I didn’t realize you were writing a second piece. Kudos for that!
Second moon: I am sorry to hear about the depression. Here is a (((hug))). Joshua Gabe is on an adventure though, so that must be good.
Starrystorm—figuring out is a good thing! Keep up the work. Good luck with the sinus infection. Yuck! Pain. No good.
WGough: Good to see you too! Congrats on the progress.
Layla—so cool you are still plugging onward with all the things.
Keithy: the prince had better find out then.
Cindy—Modem Joy, sister, awesome!
April, LOL “There was one good chapter.” I’m sure there were many.
Inspector: Hi!
Animad: Well done on the words!
So I made the three changes I hoped to make today—it was literally like condensing notes into a print job, counting the words in each chapter, and then tucking in various sentences throughout different chapters as another thread of continuity in the story world.
Tomorrow I will break a secondary character’s leg and then pull him out of the subsequent chapters. His presence was problematic in the second half of the book. This is a medium sized edit, but it must be made so that the heroes can shine a little more strongly.