Edit: I got a brilliant response on this, and I'm going to have to be closed to critique swaps for now. I'm still open if anybody is looking to beta read of course. Thank you!
If you're interested in some steampunk, well mister, you best just keep on readin'.
Pitch:
In the frosty wildwoods of a distant moon, Lowa Amazaki lives by a rule that is particular to girls like her: no boyfriends allowed. This is because Lowa is one of those whose hearts warp space and time, and stimulation could result in a dangerous jump through both.
But when Lowa is hunted by people that want to rip her heart from her chest and use it for their steam-powered war machines, Lowa needs a way to escape. Recently, a girl named Aurora has been making advances, and well, nobody ever said anything about having girlfriends. But as Lowa will soon find out, she was meant to keep her enchanted heart from going into overdrive for good reason, because messing with spacetime can lead to terrifying outcomes...
Why choose me: I'm 100% free from now until the beginning of September, so I'll be able to read and comment your entire manuscript in a matter of days. I also have a degree in Physics, so hard sci-fi is right up my alley.
What kind of novels I would like to read: Ideally YA sci-fi/fantasy.
What I'm looking for in a beta/critique partner: Ideally somone that can flag up anything that they think is an issue, or leave any other comments. Doesn't have to be super detailed. I like to be firm but gentle in my critiques.
Please send me a PM if you're interested, and I'll send you my first three chapters so you can see if you'd like to take it further. For critique partners, I would also like to have a look at some of your work to tell if we're a good fit.
☆ミ Let's break into the sci-fi/fantasy market together ☆彡
If you're interested in some steampunk, well mister, you best just keep on readin'.
Pitch:
In the frosty wildwoods of a distant moon, Lowa Amazaki lives by a rule that is particular to girls like her: no boyfriends allowed. This is because Lowa is one of those whose hearts warp space and time, and stimulation could result in a dangerous jump through both.
But when Lowa is hunted by people that want to rip her heart from her chest and use it for their steam-powered war machines, Lowa needs a way to escape. Recently, a girl named Aurora has been making advances, and well, nobody ever said anything about having girlfriends. But as Lowa will soon find out, she was meant to keep her enchanted heart from going into overdrive for good reason, because messing with spacetime can lead to terrifying outcomes...
Why choose me: I'm 100% free from now until the beginning of September, so I'll be able to read and comment your entire manuscript in a matter of days. I also have a degree in Physics, so hard sci-fi is right up my alley.
What kind of novels I would like to read: Ideally YA sci-fi/fantasy.
What I'm looking for in a beta/critique partner: Ideally somone that can flag up anything that they think is an issue, or leave any other comments. Doesn't have to be super detailed. I like to be firm but gentle in my critiques.
Please send me a PM if you're interested, and I'll send you my first three chapters so you can see if you'd like to take it further. For critique partners, I would also like to have a look at some of your work to tell if we're a good fit.
☆ミ Let's break into the sci-fi/fantasy market together ☆彡
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