Quote Originally Posted by I wouldn't explore a rewrite until you've had some other people look at your work. For that purpose, I can strongly recommend [URL="https://absolutewrite.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?26-Share-Your-Work"
Share Your Work[/URL] here on AW for help with both pages and query letter - we've got a lot of smart, incisive folks who write in pretty much every genre there is.