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Steppe

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the mind
cracked

I heard
saw
the break

an orange door
or window
closing-
partly

there was no pain

a soft white curtain
now
to the end
of my days


to see
ahead
all I need

one lit stone
or leaf
endears me
to a poem
 

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the mind
cracked

I heard
saw
the break

an orange door
or window
closing-
partly

there was no pain

a soft white curtain
now
to the end
of my days


to see
ahead
all I need

one lit stone
or leaf
endears me
to a poem
This was really evocative and interesting as a vision.