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Hi Everyone,
First time post. Just looking for thoughts on the line between a unsympathetic and complicated protagonist. I recently got some
feedback on a novel I am editing with a very immersive first person viewpoint. It is a female - if that matters. The reader said at
times she was unsympathetic and that other readers may find it difficult to read. Basically, the reader told me that she was a bit
of a b*&ch. My view is that my main character is cynical, a bit judgement and cold due to years living alone.
I have read other successful novels with unsympathetic protagonists ie. Vanity Fair for a classic and I thought Brooklyn had a difficult lead. So
what's the difference?
I was thinking that instead of 'voice' issues, it may be a problem with the characterization. Mainly, if the reader is given a reason for why
my protagonist is a b*&ch (life experience, distant father), she may become more sympathetic despite her character faults.
What does everything else think??
First time post. Just looking for thoughts on the line between a unsympathetic and complicated protagonist. I recently got some
feedback on a novel I am editing with a very immersive first person viewpoint. It is a female - if that matters. The reader said at
times she was unsympathetic and that other readers may find it difficult to read. Basically, the reader told me that she was a bit
of a b*&ch. My view is that my main character is cynical, a bit judgement and cold due to years living alone.
I have read other successful novels with unsympathetic protagonists ie. Vanity Fair for a classic and I thought Brooklyn had a difficult lead. So
what's the difference?
I was thinking that instead of 'voice' issues, it may be a problem with the characterization. Mainly, if the reader is given a reason for why
my protagonist is a b*&ch (life experience, distant father), she may become more sympathetic despite her character faults.
What does everything else think??