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Hi!
I have a problem with possessive adjectives. Here's an example of a sentence I'm not happy with:
She felt as if her dream of unraveling her past was slipping between her fingers.
Do you have any tips\tricks or advice that might help me improve my sentences? Is there another way to rephrase sentences without possessive adjectives?
And most importantly - what is your paragraph structure?
Thanks in advance!
I have a problem with possessive adjectives. Here's an example of a sentence I'm not happy with:
She felt as if her dream of unraveling her past was slipping between her fingers.
Do you have any tips\tricks or advice that might help me improve my sentences? Is there another way to rephrase sentences without possessive adjectives?
And most importantly - what is your paragraph structure?
Thanks in advance!