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No more betas needed for this YA Suspense/Thriller (72K)

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CJSimone

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I'm happy with any and all feedback, but I'm less interested in line-edits (It would be great if you gave feedback like a reader leaving a review). Please PM me. THANK YOU so much to anyone who responds!!!

The pitch is:

A mysterious invitation.
An opportunity to get off the streets and into a mansion.
But when teens disappear, they must uncover the secrets of their invitation to survive.​
 
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I'd also appreciate any thoughts on whether I should be labeling this a suspense, thriller, psychological suspense, psychological thriller or what.
 

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I'm interested in beta-reading if you're still looking for someone, CJSimone. I'd focus on doing this as a reader and pointing out story elements instead of as a writer and pointing out sentence structure, etc. My email is author.yawatta.hosby(AT)gmail(DOT)com.
 

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I'm interested in beta-reading if you're still looking for someone, CJSimone. I'd focus on doing this as a reader and pointing out story elements instead of as a writer and pointing out sentence structure, etc. My email is author.yawatta.hosby(AT)gmail(DOT)com.

Thank you so much, AgathaChristieFan! And that's perfect, doing it more as a reader. I'll send it to you. :)
 

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Bumping in the hopes of finding one or two more betas. Please PM (or write a reply here). Thank you!

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No more beta readers needed for now. Thanks so much to all who've read/offered!
 
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