Waka Waka World - The Winkleman paradox ( Chapter)

Nadinarte

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I posted this in the wrong section! Sorry about it!
I should have posted it in the SYW section, I realized it too late!
Sorry.
 
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Elle.

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Hi,

Two things that will help getting critiques:

1) Edit the text and put hard returns in between paragraphs otherwise it looks like a big wall of text which is off putting
2) Put the word count in the title