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Basic Writing questions is not a crit forum. All crits belong in Share Your Work
[Suicide discussion] Getting to the point
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Oh, satyesu,
Understand your issue but impossible to comment.
The 'not a lot happens' is the key here, to me. Something of interest must happen to keep your reader reading.
All depends how the original opening is written.
Use SYW and see how others react. You may want to put an up-front trigger warning on it if the content might disturb some folk.
Understand your issue but impossible to comment.
The 'not a lot happens' is the key here, to me. Something of interest must happen to keep your reader reading.
All depends how the original opening is written.
Use SYW and see how others react. You may want to put an up-front trigger warning on it if the content might disturb some folk.
This isn't a basic writing question.
It is, in fact, a question only the writer can answer.
Write. You can always revise.
It is, in fact, a question only the writer can answer.
Write. You can always revise.
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