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The SYW forum apparently disallows drafts, so I can't share specifics, but I've gotten to a point in my story that I had intended to be the second chapter, and I'm less than 4,000 words in! I think my writing is too sparse, but I'm not sure what it's missing. I'm trying to include setting descriptions and character movement, but it's minimal because I don't want to include irrelevant information. What am I doing wrong?
If it helps, here's roughly the first half of my plot: https://bubbl.us/MTQxODAzNS85OTkzND..._source=shared-link&utm_medium=link&s=9993408
If it helps, here's roughly the first half of my plot: https://bubbl.us/MTQxODAzNS85OTkzND..._source=shared-link&utm_medium=link&s=9993408