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Although I have not set any deliberate parameters for my WIP, readers would perceive it as 3rd person limited, perhaps even deep limited.
Given that it might be read as deep limited and that the main character is a child, I have been considering how this could impact readers’ perspectives on environmental descriptions.
Deep limited was not a deliberate stylistic choice - I just wanted to zoom in at times to highlight motivation - so I don’t think I should get too fussy about throwaway but concise descriptions like, “the sun disappeared behind the western hills”, if the MC would not have such directional knowledge.
What do AWers think?
Given that it might be read as deep limited and that the main character is a child, I have been considering how this could impact readers’ perspectives on environmental descriptions.
Deep limited was not a deliberate stylistic choice - I just wanted to zoom in at times to highlight motivation - so I don’t think I should get too fussy about throwaway but concise descriptions like, “the sun disappeared behind the western hills”, if the MC would not have such directional knowledge.
What do AWers think?