I read this thread all the way through and I still have questions.
My main WIP is in omniscient POV. It's the sort of omniscient that stays very close to a single POV per scene (no head-hopping, and yes, I checked scrupulously) but still includes details the character we're close to can't know.
People who have read the whole book don't find the POV jarring. People who've read the first few lines do. Clearly I'm not introducing the POV right—perhaps the whole book is off, too, though the jury's still out on that one. I do know—after attempting to switch to 3rd-limited multi-POV—that omni is what suits the story best.
Therein hangs my question: how do I seamlessly clue the reader in to an omni POV?
Or—because the work would be good for me—what are some good articles/books on POV or examples of this sort of omniscient that I should read? My readers have compared the POV to Jeanne Birdsall's The Penderwicks, so I'm starting there, but I'd love some more examples—especially adult fiction since that example is MG and my WIP is not.
Thank you in advance!
My main WIP is in omniscient POV. It's the sort of omniscient that stays very close to a single POV per scene (no head-hopping, and yes, I checked scrupulously) but still includes details the character we're close to can't know.
People who have read the whole book don't find the POV jarring. People who've read the first few lines do. Clearly I'm not introducing the POV right—perhaps the whole book is off, too, though the jury's still out on that one. I do know—after attempting to switch to 3rd-limited multi-POV—that omni is what suits the story best.
Therein hangs my question: how do I seamlessly clue the reader in to an omni POV?
Or—because the work would be good for me—what are some good articles/books on POV or examples of this sort of omniscient that I should read? My readers have compared the POV to Jeanne Birdsall's The Penderwicks, so I'm starting there, but I'd love some more examples—especially adult fiction since that example is MG and my WIP is not.
Thank you in advance!