Hi. I'm from Nevada, started writing seriously about 2 years ago. I finished a novel, realized it was awful, completely rewrote it, and edited it. Now I'm working on another. I read a lot of genres but can't seem to get away from writing fantasy.

I'll be honest: most of the reason I'm here is to get some feedback on my query. I read a lot of resources, posted on multiple critique sites, and even got a professional writer to look at it and say it was strong. But it hasn't been working so far. Form rejections suck, but I have to keep my head up and keep getting better.

In the meantime, I'm working on Book 2, and hope to give some helpful feedback before I post/work on my query.