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Beta/Swap for YA Low Fantasy

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Lhipenwhe

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Hello everyone. I'm looking for a beta reader for my 70k YA low fantasy WIP. It's seen multiple beta readers and self-edits, and hopefully is in a better condition than a first draft. The plot is about a young woman trying to break free of the demonic pact she made as a child. Tentatively titled "Demon's Heart", you can look at the latest draft of the query here: https://absolutewrite.com/forums/sh...on-Post-43&p=10528495&viewfull=1#post10528495.

Right now I'm looking for advice/critiques on how to get it into querying shape. I've felt like I've taken it as far as I could, but previous comments from some beta readers have made me skeptical of my progress. I'm willing to swap projects with people of any genre and somewhat similar length to provide feedback for. We can exchange samples first to see if we're a good fit for one another.

PM me if you're interested.
 
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