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So this wonderful post gave me the idea to look for feedback on the two maps I made (for myself, to help me envision the world my story takes place in). Are there any names that strike you as too odd/too close to something else?
(My youngest came up with The King's War for a working title)
RED - the kingdom the story takes place in
GREEN - the antagonist kingdom
ORANGE - protagonist kingdom's allies
PURPLE - antagonist kingdom's allies
YELLOW - neutral but sending resources to antagonist kingdom's allies
Capital cities are in yellow.
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This map is to show the distance between the capital cities of the protagonist and antagonist kingdoms.
The town in gray (Ploweun) is the setting of the B story and this map shows where it sits in relation to the two capital cities.
The pink triangle is Selka Valley. It is lands that belonged to Vartania a couple of generations ago, but has since been settled by a small ethnic group of Weltavora, the Braites.
I have a bit more information about each kingdom, if required.
Thank you for criticisms and comments.
(My youngest came up with The King's War for a working title)
RED - the kingdom the story takes place in
GREEN - the antagonist kingdom
ORANGE - protagonist kingdom's allies
PURPLE - antagonist kingdom's allies
YELLOW - neutral but sending resources to antagonist kingdom's allies
Capital cities are in yellow.
***
This map is to show the distance between the capital cities of the protagonist and antagonist kingdoms.
The town in gray (Ploweun) is the setting of the B story and this map shows where it sits in relation to the two capital cities.
The pink triangle is Selka Valley. It is lands that belonged to Vartania a couple of generations ago, but has since been settled by a small ethnic group of Weltavora, the Braites.
I have a bit more information about each kingdom, if required.
Thank you for criticisms and comments.
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